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Fpg_Jordan
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Using info your character would have access to, such as watching an mc tag through walls
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Doing something your character can't
    Status: Accepted

On the second day of Malin's Welcome, 1642, in San'Raakh, Delyorg'Gorkil and his lifemate, Keylork'Gorkil (formerly known as Keylork'Lur) bore a son with scarlett red eyes like his mother and a large body like his father, and decided to name him a combination of they're names, Delkey is what they chose. Five years after his birth, Delkey'Gorkil and his parents were out in the desert training, Del'key was fighting a some scorpions and easily killing them, much to his father's delight. As the training goes on Delkey's mother strayed away from the to gather food for dinner and him and his father continued the combat training, then all three were brought to their knees in because of a blood curdling screech, that could be heard for miles, was let out above them, Delyorg recovered and withdrew his gargantuan battle axe and immediately saw the culprits. A flock of at least fifteen Vourukh were circling above, the largest one let out a guttural chirp and they dove to attack. Delyorg, who stood at 9'0, orders Delkey to stay behind him and began to combat the massive birds. Delyorg was slicing through the Vourukh left and right, until one of them spit an acidic vile onto him, splashing all over the massive uruk's body and some landing on his son behind him. Delyorg reared back in agony, continued to battle as the vile burned his flesh, and shouted "take him", Keylork ran to her son and threw him over her shoulder to try and escape the the massacre. While hanging over his mother's shoulders as they fleed, Delkey watched through one eye as the few remaining Vourukh final got ahold of his father, as they pummeled him, the birds lifted in front of the setting sun and torn Delkey's hero into pieces. A week after the horrific event, one of their clansmen found Delyorg's necklace and gave it to Delkey. He wore his father's necklace and hasn't taken it off for the last thirteen years. Delkey worked to become as strong as he could so his future children wouldn't suffer the same horrors he has, joining the military at twelve years old and rose to the top of his class after fiv years of service. To this day Delkey visits his mother on a regular basis to make sure she's alright.


Character Name: Delkey'Gorkil
Character Race: Orc
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: A Gray-ish green behemoth of an uruk, with scarlett eyes, ivory tusks and an almost regal disposition, around 750-780 pounds and a height of 8'10-9'0
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Your application has been placed on:

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♥ Your definition to metagaming is incorrect. You can find the definition from the WIKI

♥ Your character age doesn't match up with the year of birth (1646). It's currently year 1660 


Else your application is great, and I am glad you managed put so many server lore references to it! Good job!

 

You have 24 hours to do the asked changes!

 

I also recommend you to join up in The New Player Discord !

 

And of course, if you are in need of assistance or if you ever have any questions, feel free to contact me at all times here on the forums, via discord: Ali#0878 or in-game. My username is MyLittleUnicorn

Good luck!

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Your application has been:

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Thank you for applying and being fast with the asked edits!
You will be implemented into the server shortly!

While so, if you'd like you could read up some more server lore from the Wiki !

And if you yet haven't, I still recommend you to join up in The New Player Discord !

 

And if you need help on getting started on the server, or if you ever have any questions, feel free to at all times contact me here on the forums, via discord: Ali#0878 or in-game. My username is MyLittleUnicorn

 

Good luck and enjoy the journey around Lord Of The Craft!

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