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By lemonke

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: When you use informations out of character, in the roleplay
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: when you don't give a chance to the other player to decide what will happen to his character
    Status: Accepted
Character Name: Hiro D'eril
Character Race: Halfling
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: She has green eyes, brown short hairs that covers her face, a scar going through her face, she is very short (2'4'' ft). She looks like a Male
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Myleres

Your application has been placed on:

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-LOTC is primarily text-based, and the chat is integral to getting the full experience. Please go clean up your sentences and use proper words. For example, 'hurted' and 'proticolarity' are not English words. Also, you seem to have called your character a 'he' in some places, and a 'she' in others. Please choose one of these, or refer to them as 'they' all throughout your biography.

-Although not necessary to be accepted, I would recommend dropping the shoes on your skin. Traditionally, halflings don't use shoes. It is completely fine if you would like to keep your skin the way it currently is, but this may affect roleplay for your character.

 

You have 24 hours to make the above changes. 

If you need any assistance, feel free to send me a message or join the new player discord: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

Best of luck!

 

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Myleres

Your application has been:

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You will be implemented into the server shortly. I would recommend joining the new player discord in the meantime: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

Once again, I will stress that this server is heavily text-based. English is the main language and you will need to be able to communicate effectively using it to gain the best experience possible.

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