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ZeaZar

By ZeaZar

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: it is the use of out-of-game information or resources to affect one's in-game decisions.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Power-emoting is when a player/character is doing something that would not be possible to do.
    Status: Accepted

Razan was born in a Highlander village (close to the city of Markev) to a hunter's daugher and a blacksmith. As a boy Razan worked with his father in the blacksmith and he became very good at crafting weapons and armor. Razan had secretly crafted a sword for him self and every night he trained to become a great swordsman. When Razan was 22 years old the village was attacked by bandits lead by a necromancer, Razan's parents was killed. After the attack Razan swore to have revenge, he decided to leave the village to find a teacher that would teach him arcane magic so he could become powerfull enough to kill the necromancer. In the following 6 months Razan has traveled from city to city in his search for a teacher. Razan had almost run out of all his mina and decided to stop his traveling and go to Markev to work as a blacksmith. Five and a half year passed as Razan worked and he had made a home for himself in Markev, but he knew the day would come when he will have to leave so he can avenge his family.

Character Name: Razan
Character Race: Highlander
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 26
Physical Description: Looking at Razan the first thing you would notice is his very lightblue eyes. He got blond hair. Worn clothes.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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_NotChris

Changed Status to Under Review

Your Application has been places on:

 

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A) Please re-write your Metagaming Definition, I'm unclear of what it means by reading ours. 

B) Haense is not a city, its a nation. The capital of Haense is Markev, that is probably what you're looking for

C) Please add more to your Character Bio, as it stands it is very lack-luster. Add more.

D) Your Interesting Facts need to be in sentences, not one word.

 

 

If any of the reasons I stated above can be answered on the Wiki, the link provided will take you to the home page. You can find the Metagaming, Powergaming, and Roleplaying definitions on the Wiki. Also! You can find loads of other informations on the Wiki, just have a look around Wiki Link

 

Being placed on Pending is not a bad thing, all it means is that your applications was good, but it needs a little bit more. These changes have to be done within 24 hours. Editing is very easy, find the [Edit] feature on your application and hit it, you can change the wrong or need fixing things there.

After you’re done editing, please contact me and I'll review your application once more. When I finish with this your application will be placed on either Accepted or Denied!

 

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_NotChris

Your Application has been:

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From me and the rest of the Application team would like to welcome you to our community! We hope you enjoy your stay. The LotC Wiki has lots of useful information, you can use it to expand your knowledge on lore and such, Wiki Link.

 

The discord like provided, https://discord.gg/eySYjqw will take you to the New Player Discord, join and ask any questions if you have any, It can be a very helpful tool for playing.

 

If you’ve got any questions at all, feel free to message me on the forums, at my Discord, Chris_#5840, or on the server with the /msg Top_Goon command, or the /atreq command will allow you to place a ticket for assistance with myself of one of my colleagues!

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