GoldDistance

• Your powergaming definition, while not wrong, needs a bit of an addition. I suggest looking up power emoting.
• I’d suggest a little work on your biography. You have included two very vague references to lore; the name of the world once, and a religion.
  • Remember. Atlas was the previous map. We are on Arcas now- So while the character will have been born there, she would not be there now.
  • I suggest elaborating on the lore side of things a little more. Where does she live now? Where did her family go in the transition between Atlas and Arcas?
• For an elf, 18 is very young, and the character will culturarly be defined as a child. While fine, you should be aware of this.
• Please elaborate on your character description.
  • Height, build, expand it a little as opposed to just making a list.
  • Purple hair is not natural, so be aware that if you must have it, it will have been dyed.
• Your interesting facts seem all negative. Instead, look up some trait lists and pick out a positive and a neutral to go alongside a negative.

Please, make your changes in your own time! Any questions, feel free to PM me on the forums or on discord, Laurelin#0797

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Fixed

On 5/10/2019 at 10:45 PM, Lirinya said:

Changed Status to Pending

Fixed it

All I'll add is that power emoting can be anything. 

Make every action against someone else an attempt, and consider using the /roll command to further make sure everything is fair. 

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