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Grey8500

Grey8500

By Grey8500

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: The player knows something that the character doesn't.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: When a player say something happens that makes it so the other player can't react. Like "Billy cuts John's arm off".
    Status: Accepted

Grey is a Henseti that grew up in a small village.  His father made him become an armorsmith's apprentice when he was 13 years old.  By the age of 16, he was able to make swords better than his master.  During his free time, he learned how to fight with a sword and bow.  He was able to hit a target from over 50 meters away on horseback.  Grey always loved to study the art of war, he found the best tactics for every scenario.  A week after his 18th birthday, his village was attacked and burned.  His mother and sister died in the fire, while his father was taken captive.  He snuck into the camp, and killed everyone in there sleep.  When he found his father, somebody had slit his throat and cut off his hand.  He left the area to get some money a week later.  Grey did every kind of work, from shining peoples shoes, to serving drinks to people of all races in taverns.

One day while working at a tavern in a city, he got into a fight with a group of men.  When the guards heard the commotion, they quickly tackled Grey, and put him in the city dungeon.  Grey kept praying to God that he would be merciful, and release him quickly.  He spent 3 years in the dungeon for five accounts of murderer.  When he got out, he was completely broke.  Grey figured he had to get some money, so he became a bounty hunter and assassin.  He now roams the land of Atlas looking for riches beyond his wildest dreams.

Character Name: Grey
Character Race: Highlander
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 25
Physical Description: Six foot tall man with dark eyes, brown hair, and a beard.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Cornivore

Changed Status to Under Review

T4JBJW3.png You are almost there, you only have a little bit left to do.

I. The first step would be to look at your powergame definition once more, It is not the correct definition we are looking for, please refer to the wiki.  https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Power-emoting

II. The second thing would be, to add something about the lore into your biography I am currently not seeing anything, if you need help heres the wiki. https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

III. Third and final thing to note would be, if you need any help please feel free to send me a message over the forums, in game, or on the New Player Discord. https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

(You have 24 hours to make your final edits)

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