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HiperPhanter
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: funnyguy3d
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Never force an action or state on another player without giving them an opportunity to react, or a choice in the situation
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: for example you plan and ambush on a group of 'bandits' and somehow one of the players near hears about it in your ooc and uses the said info they learned in ooc to use and avoid your ambush in rp because they know you are waiting there, basically makes the whole situation bullshit
    Status: Accepted

Character Name: Dulfish SkullCracker
Character Race: Orc
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: 8ft/ 2.44m
650lb/294 kg
muscular
sapphire pine GREEN skin
bright pine grove green eyes but right one is blind
has a scar


Roleplay Scenario:

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


*leans his body inside the tent and gets in and says* "No, i don't like cushions" *he takes the stool next to her and pulls it towards him and sits on it, the stool's legs break after he sits on it, he uncomfortably removes the now broken stool and places its remains next to him, he sits next to the broken stool, on the ground.*

"I was a little youngling when i got rescued by some dwarfes, they took me when i was weak, fed me and kept me in company, they raised me and loved me for some reason, they were more kind to me than i could ever be to them, i loved them more than they loved me.

when i was still new to the camp, a male dwarf saw me as a burgler and swinged with his axe and wounded my head, making me fall unconscious, making my right eye blinded and leaving a scar with it."

"A female dwarf came to the rescue while he was preparing to finish me off, he jumped infront of his blade while he was preparing to chop my head off with it,"

"i don't know much about that night, like i said, i was unconcious." 

*he starts giggling* "he then had to teach me blacksmithing AND mining for a year straight for an apology, since he was the great blacksmith of the camp.

when there was nothing better to do i noticed a wild boar appeared in front of our camp, i thought i could prove my worth to the dwarfs and jumped on it, tackled it, after that i tried to break his tusks with my bare hands, i couldn't break his tusks, he threw me to a nearby tree after a quick brawl, the rest of the camp seeing whats happening to me just stood there, watching me getting killed by a wild pig, he charged at me, crushed a few ribs, i almost got hit in the neck, i was shocked, my family now abondened me!? they wanted me to just die like this!? i escaped into the forest around the camp, never looked back because they betrayed me! *he hits the broken stool out of his anger and breaks it even more.* "i then started exploring, seeing danger upon danger, i was covering at first but, i understood i can't run forever and started taking fights way off my scale and sometimes won! Now, im always looking for a fight!" *his face get's excited but returns back to normal* 

*he puts his hands on his head and starts to think*

"Oh yeah.. there was that fancy looking elf that saved my skin" *he starts to chuckles*

"He saved me from a party of bandits, while i was blinded to look for a proper fight."

"when i first saw them, i charged at them with anger and excitement for a brawl, they tackled me really quickly since there were 5 of them, they chained me to a tree, in blind panic i get a hold of the bandits leg while i was falling and threw him to a rock near the tree i was tackled, i don't know what happened to him, i never bothered to check it.  his friends took stuff more seriously and started holding me, i couldn't get back up, they started slashing my body with daggers and swords, they were hitting me on my arms and legs, i still don't know how dumb they were to not go for my neck or heart. *Dulfish chuckles* when i thought it was all over, i started seeing arrows pass by,one of the arrows got to my chains, it somehow broke the metal chains, after i got freed off the chains, i got up and crushed one of the bandits arm while he was not looking at me, i jabbed him so hard that i knocked him out, i threw his body at his friend with my last strenth, that tackled him to the ground, stressed and paniced, trying to understand what the fu** is going on, maxy shot an arrow to his head off a branch, while the other bandit panicked, he jumped on my back and tried to cut my neck with his dagger, i tried to get a hold of him, and i heard a 'whoosh!' sound, after that, i quickly turned my back and saw the bandit lying on the ground. arrow inside his head, after i yelled at the silhouette on the tree branch, the silhouette came down on the ground holding his bow like his life depended on it, then he asked me.

-where are you traveling to, big guy!- i answered "Kingdom Of Balian!, you headin' there? if you do, lead the way." he nodded. We started traveling there together to the Kingdom ,we small talked along the way while we were going to the kingdom. And i learned his name is 'Celeborn Max'. Funny sounding name for an elf, *Dulfish smiles* When we got to the Kingdom, he mentioned a tent that listened to traveler's story's, and here we are.."

*sees her looking at his cut tusks* "Oh yeah! i also got adviced to cut my tusks off that 'Max the Elf' fella, said it made me 'sound dumb', damn that elf was right.. I first didn't care but, now that i think about it, it was the right choice."



"Oh, I just, uh…" you stutter, tensing up. You eye the crone, then back outside the tent. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…

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Hi there! Your application has been put on pending as there are changes that need to be made before you can be accepted. See below. 

 

  • Please review our Wiki’s definition of Metagaming. Your response is not quite right. Ensure to include an example in your response. If you're having a hard time writing something down/or don’t know how else to word it, contact a community member. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 

     https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

    You can also learn more about combat roleplay here

    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fIJioVePKYo



 

  • In your Roleplay Scenario & Backstory, you’ve mentioned Celeborn Max. Please clarify whether this character is an NPC or a player on the server. If they are a player, kindly provide either a screenshot of their permission for you to include them in your backstory or their contact information so we can confirm their consent.

 

  • Please make sure to mark out what your character is saying with quotation marks ""
  • Example: Judy laughs. “How are you doing?” 

 

  • Please change your character’s actions to 3rd person.
  • Example: Judy stomps her foot on the ground. “How dare you!” she screams.

 

  • Your Roleplay Scenario &  Backstory has mentions of Powergaming! 

“when i first saw them, i charged at them with anger and excitement for a brawl, they tackled me really quickly since there were 5 of them, they chained me to a tree, i took the one who chained me while i was falling and hit him next to a tree, crushing his skull, his friends took stuff more seriously and started holding me, i couldn't get back up, they started slashing my body with daggers and swords, my thick skin saved my life, like it did many times. when i thought it was all over, i started seeing arrows pass by,one of the arrows got to my chains, it somehow broke the metal chains, after i got freed i got up and crushed one of the bandits arm while he was not looking at me, i punched him so hard that his head cracked, i threw his corpse at his friend

 

In the highlighted sections you are powergaming because your actions are unrealistic. You

cannot crush a skull - especially while falling, it would be impossible for you to not take damage

while you are being stabbed by swords and daggers, and you cannot punch someone so hard that

their head cracks. 

 

  • Your Physical Description doesn’t match the race you picked! You cannot be heavier than 650 lbs. Please refer to the Racial Hub WIKI page for more information.

 

If you do not make these changes within 48 hours,  you will be denied. 

When you are finished, please message me on Discord @peachcool to let me know, or if you

don’t have Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

You can join the LotC Discord here: Discord

If you still need help, check the wiki! WIKI

Link to the New Player hub! : New Player Hub

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Hello! You have been accepted onto the server! Well done on your application. Welcome to the wonderful community of LotC!
 

To get started, The server IP is mc.lotc.co The server is version 1.21.1

I suggest going to tutorial island or do;  /creq Can someone come assist me?

 

Here are some links to help you start out!

Settlement Guides

Nations & Major Settlements

 If you need help, feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord @peachcool

 Additionally, on the server you can do /creq <message> with your question and someone will help 

 you right away or you can also use the LotC Discord here!: Discord 

 

Linked below is the new player hub and a new player guide, look over it if you have a chance. 

New player hub

Another New Player Guide 

Have fun role playing!

 

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