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IAmBrick
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    Discord: IAmBrick#6341
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Using things outside of the game to learn of things inside of the game.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Power-gaming is giving yourself an unfair advantage via ignoring your character own physical or mental limitations.
    Status: Accepted

(I wasn’t able to fit everything I wanted into personality so I will do that here, Brick doesn’t wear typical elven clothes, only because he feels that they aren’t “Comfortable.” thus he wears his shorts and backpack. Brick doesn't like to be judged or looked down upon like just another evil orc. Brick will occasionally hit or break things when he doesn’t understand something or isn’t able to do something instantly, though he will behave eventually...give him time. He will usually only listen to those he truly trusts.)

(I also wasn’t able to mention that Brick’s skin is a garnet red, and has some features of an elf, though you might need to look at him for awhile before you notice, in the Physical description, on with the biography now.)

       

        Brick was born into this world in an elven village, with both his mother and father dead. Brick is no ordinary orc, he is also half elf. Brick’s mother had fallen in love with an orc who had spared her life. The two kept their relationship a secret until Brick’s mother fell pregnant, and she had to reveal the father. Brick’s father was brutally beaten to death by his camp for “betraying them.” Brick’s mother, however, died during birth. Brick was taken in by his aunt, Molir. Molir treated Brick as he was her own son, though he was her sister’s. Though Brick looked more like an orc, he was raised to act as an elf. To be specific, a Snow Elf. Brick, luckily, was born with little tusks due to being half elf, this meaning he can speak fluent Blah. Brick grew up studying the beginning of the universe. “There were no planes of existence. There was nothing. Just the Void. And a bright shining light. It was not a light we could see, it was not really white either, but it would be the only way to explain the existence of such a Deity in contrast to the emptiness of the Void. None knows why, how or when this Deity existed. It is, in-fact, heresy to speculate on such matters. The all knowing God was this Deity.” he was taught, though he did not wish to believe in one all powerful god. He knows that something or someone made him, he just chooses to wait until death for a complete and real answer. Brick is taught to use a bow and sword. Brick becomes an excellent marksman and a fair swordsman. Brick became both intelligent and great with combat. On Brick’s 18th birthday celebration his village was attacked by a party of orcs and goblins. The party massacred half of the village, mostly women and children. A lone goblin caught Brick off guard, and stabbed him through his stomach. Just as the goblin takes the dagger out and begins to finish the job, he is shot with an arrow. Brick passes out and awakes to his combat trainer sanding over him. Brick is informed about the massacre, he is also informed of who saved his life. Molir saved Brick’s life with that arrow, but she died soon after. Brick blames himself for this raid. He feels that the orcs and goblins were sent here to kill the village and mainly him. He doesn’t only think this, he knows this. A note was on an orcs corpse, stating, that if this party failed.......there will be more, Brick must die. Brick knows what he must do, he leaves his village at night with little supplies. Brick wishes no more harm to these elves, he makes sure that the orcs know he has went out on his own. Brick vows to kill every single soul involved in this raid, even if it costs him his life. He will avenge her, Brick will have blood for the death of...Molir.


Character Name: Brick
Character Race: Orc
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Brick is 7 ft tall and weighs 378 lb, his eyes are black. He as no hair other than his eyebrows and he wears only tattered blue shorts and a backpack.
Roleplay Scenario:

“Adventure, sir. If you’ll excuse me I must be on my way. I need to buy some very important supplies. Sorry for the intrusion.”

 

 

 

(BTW the changes to my skin are very slight, and hardly noticeable.

Screenshot of Skin:



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Hey there! At this time your application has been placed on,

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For reasons such as:

 

Ø Your Metagaming and powergaming definitions need to be fixed, use the wiki to change this

Ø Orcs can not look like a ‘Stone-brick based golem’

Ø You need two references to the lore in your application

Ø You can not weigh 2 tons, the max for an orc is about 400lbs

Ø Your Roleplay senario should be changed to match the language of the orcs

Ø Your skin also needs to be changed from a brick

 

Your application was good, however there are just a few issues that need editing. You have 24 hours to make the changes. Please message me here on the forums, or through my discord once you’ve made the changes, and I’ll take another look at your application. Don’t hesitate to ask me something!

 

The Wiki has lots of important lore information, please refer to this when making changes. You can also join our New Player Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Community team, and meet other server players.

 

You can contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Meteor Dragon#8579) or by /tell (MeteorDragon9000) in-game for any questions or concerns.

 

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Hey there! At this time your application has been placed on,

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For reasons such as:

 

Ø Blah is basically common though due to fact they have tusks(your skin should also show this), and orcs cant get rid of their tusks as it’s part of their skull

 

Your application was good, however there are just a few issues that need editing. You have 24 hours to make the changes. Please message me here on the forums, or through my discord once you’ve made the changes, and I’ll take another look at your application. Don’t hesitate to ask me something!

 

The Wiki has lots of important lore information, please refer to this when making changes. You can also join our New Player Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Community team, and meet other server players.

 

You can contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Meteor Dragon#8579) or by /tell (MeteorDragon9000) in-game for any questions or concerns.

 

Good Luck!

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1 hour ago, MeteorDragon said:

 

 

Hey there! At this time your application has been placed on,

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For reasons such as:

 

Ø Blah is basically common though due to fact they have tusks(your skin should also show this), and orcs cant get rid of their tusks as it’s part of their skull

 

Your application was good, however there are just a few issues that need editing. You have 24 hours to make the changes. Please message me here on the forums, or through my discord once you’ve made the changes, and I’ll take another look at your application. Don’t hesitate to ask me something!

 

The Wiki has lots of important lore information, please refer to this when making changes. You can also join our New Player Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Community team, and meet other server players.

 

You can contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Meteor Dragon#8579) or by /tell (MeteorDragon9000) in-game for any questions or concerns.

 

Good Luck!

Could I change it to, Brick, due to his tusks, can't speak perfect English, he has sort of....a lisp. He can still understand perfect English. He knows the language, but due to his tusks he has this lisp when speaking the common language.

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Your application has been:

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Welcome to LOTC! Hope you have a fun time and if you have questions feel free to contact the community team with a /creq or in #h for help chat and #ws for wandering soul!

 

For lore you can find it on the Wiki and forums! Feel free to join the New Player Discord for other questions and help, its a great community for everyone and can provide you with great rp opportunities!

 

Questions you have can also go to me, you can contact me on discord(Meteor Dragon#8479) and in game(MeteorDragon9000)!

 

Have fun out there!

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