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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Using out of character information in character
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Is when you force someone to take part in a RolePlay action without giving him a chance to respond
    Status: Accepted

Jakhatir Kegbrew is mountain dwarf borned in Kaz'Ulrah.

Jakhatir Kegbrew was a brave warrior with a beautiful family his dad Khumdir  Kegbrew and his lovely mom Elgrouni Kegbrew.

At the age of 13 Jakhatir dad start training him for battle but Jakhatir was not the best at that and his dad wanted him to e a great fighter like him but Jakhatir did not think he could be like him and he did not really care about the training and all the stuff he thought he  was just a simple dwarf but he was not.

At age of 15 Jakhatir his dad told him stories about his grandfather how he did fight  in the wars against the Elf and then Jakhatir was amazed about what his dad told him and he was motivated by that and he starts training really hard cause he wanted to be like his grandfather.

At age of 18 Jakhatir was a great warrior by that age and his that was proud of him and his dad even tried to teach him the secrets skill of the Mountain Dwarf and Jakhatir understood and used against him in that point his dad took him in one of the biggest war and Jakhatir did fight very well and won the fight but something bad happend  his dad died in the battle .Jakhatir was really upset he was training like never did before but Jakhatir meet a Cave Dwarf a Female called Stograesli Greatbrow and she was most beautiful in there village  and they loved a lot and they married .

Jakhatir was not a religious man but his wife was praying at Yemekar and he starts belive in him.

Jakhatir start help  his tribe going in to war but Jakhatir steel does not know what the future may bring him....

 

 

Character Name: Jakhatir Kegbrew
Character Race: Mountain Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: Black Hair,Blue Eyes,Weight 190lbs,Height 4 ft
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Changed Status to Under Review

 

Your application has been placed on…

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Your powergaming definition could use refining, please feel free to take a look at our wiki page on power emoting for reference.

Could you elaborate on his biggest weakness being light? Perhaps it is a fear or something? Because light would have no magical effect on him.

 

If any of the reasons I stated involve the wiki, this link will take you right to the home page, where you can find quick links to the metagaming and power emoting definitions, as well as look around to browse our server lore! WIKI

 

Being placed on Pending means that your application was solid, though there are still some issues present that need a bit of tweaking. You’ve got 24 hours to make them using the [Edit] feature of the forum. Whenever you make any changes, contact me and I will review the application once more. After 24 hours your app will either be Accepted or Denied. If Denial is the case, you will need to wait 3 hours before making another application.

 

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If you’ve got any questions at all, feel free to message me on the forums, at my Discord, MickMeist#0001, or on the server with the /msg MickMeist command, or the /atreq command will allow you to place a ticket for assistance with myself of one of my colleagues!


 

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Your application has been:

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On behalf of the Application Team, and LoTC as a whole, I’d like to welcome you to our community!

You will be implemented shortly, during this brief wait I implore you to visit our WIKI and continue reading up on server lore.

 

This discord link:https://discord.gg/eySYjqw is the link to our New Player Discord, feel free to join and ask any questions you’d like, as well use it as a tool once you are accepted!

 

If you’ve got any questions at all, feel free to message me on the forums, at my Discord, MickMeist#0001, or on the server with the /msg MickMeist command, or the /atreq command will allow you to place a ticket for assistance with myself of one of my colleagues!

 

Can’t wait to see you roleplaying!

 

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