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IronLordFall
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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Its asking for help over other sites EX. Skype
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: the act of any character doing something they'd realistically be unable to do
    Status: Accepted

Kanji's story: well in the beginning there's not much to tell when I was 10 I was sold by my parents to slavery, I was transported to a land called Atlas there I was thought to fight, during my time as my masters warrior I grew a found attachment to the art of Archery, during one of my matches I lost my left eye, master thought that my career was over, but it wasn't I fought and I won and I lived but when I turned 25 I decided I had enough I wanted to be free learn my peoples religion and ways, I grabbed my bow aimed it at my opponent then quickly swerved at my master and released. he died then and there, I made a run for it I was free, I knew were I was going I was heading for Fenn the only place I knew Snow elves lived for sure, when I arrived I decided to rest and afterwards I got a job as a salesmen selling fruits, I saved enough to get a old bow a quiver and arrows, and now I'm on a quest to the become Atlas best archer and to free Atlas from Slavery. I Have a long road ahead.


Character Name: Kanji
Character Race: SNOW_ELF
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 25
Physical Description: Black eye-patch, blue jacket, silver hair, pale skin
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Your application has been placed on:

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 Your biography must include AT LEAST ONE server lore reference. It can be a place name, old happened event or religion for example.

 

~ Also as a reminder just; Elves aren't adults until the age of 50! But you may keep him at 18 if you wish so!

 

You have 24 hours to make the asked changes!

 

Server lore you can easily read from the Wiki !

I also recommend you to join up in The New Player Discord !

 

You may also contact me at all times here on the forums, via discord: Ali#0878 or in-game (MyLittleUnicorn) , if you are in need of assistance or if you have any questions.

You can also always ask for help on the new player discord you seem to be already on!

 
Good luck!

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Your application has been placed on:

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Thank you for making the asked changes, however there is now again some things you need to fix up:

 

It's very cliche and common that someones parents are killed by the orcs, which is why we are trying to stop people from putting that in their application, but instead try to get players to think of other ways. I'd like if you could try to come up with another thing than putting up that the orcs killed his parents. Thank you!

 

There is also issue with the dates and locations. Atlas came out 19 years ago in roleplay, in year 1643. We are currently living the year 1662. So your character could not be at the Frozen Pines at the age of 10, since that is the time we were still in the lands of Axios. I'd suggest you to look up some locations of the Axios Realm, and change that up.

 

You have 24 hours to make the asked changes!

 

Server lore you can easily read from the Wiki !

I also recommend you to join up in The New Player Discord !

 

You may also contact me at all times here on the forums, via discord: Ali#0878 or in-game (MyLittleUnicorn) , if you are in need of assistance or if you have any questions.

You can also always ask for help on the new player discord you seem to be already on!

 
Good luck!

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Your application has been:

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Thank you for applying and being fast with the changes!
You will be implemented into the server shortly!

 

While so, you can take a look of some more server lore if you want, from the Wiki !

 

Also, feel free to directly contact me at all times here on the forums, via discord: Ali#0878 or in-game. My username is MyLittleUnicorn, either was it that you need assistance on something, or if you need help on getting started on the server!


You can also in-game use the command ' /atreq (message here) ' to get aid from the Application team! We are more than willing to help you with anything!

 

 Good luck and enjoy the journey around Lord Of The Craft!  

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