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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Use passive/suggestive voice to imply action and allow cooperation/reaction from partner. Keep actions within the reasonable reality of played character.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: It can remove agency from other players and prevent story line resolution as well threatens the contract and integrity of the role play efforts of others and the project as a whole. It can damage the experience to many players who contributed to the efforts of the story
    Status: Accepted

Character Name: Darren Dartongue
Character Race: Heartlander
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 26
Physical Description: 5' 10", more ginger side of auburn 170 lbs not fit but nut chubby. blue eyes. beard/mustache matching hair color. pale skin. Pink vest, teal sleeves
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))

Darren settles onto the damp cushion, crimson-spotted vest glowing in candlelight, and lets a confident smirk play at his lips:
 

“I’m Darren Dartongue, trader of opportunity and promise. The second son to a silks trader out of the commonwealth, I have found much success in the utilization of secrets and deals, as well as meetings and arrangements."

Darren pauses, because he knows it is polite to. However, the silence is not left still for long before Darren continues.

 

"I wish for my name to be known, but I also know that it will require much less effort than time and proper introductions, and I will patiently await the latter while I fill the former"

 

Darren pauses one more time cautiously, courteously. He monitors the old hag, looking for any signs of engagement. Just long enough to ensure he had given the opportunity.

"I have had much luck in turning whispered rumors into solid ledgers. I bought a crate of saffron for a song in Val de Lagne and sold it for twice the price in Grense. I brokered a midnight parley between river thieves and a noble envoy and left them both satisfied. I taught myself the Celan tongue by hiding in a tutor’s study until dawn. I wear this silver ring as proof that every door opens for the one who dares to knock. I do not yet know what lies beyond these swamp roads but I am eager to find out.”

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Hello there! At this time your application has been placed on,

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  • In your Roleplay Response & Backstory, please use an unnamed location or a location already on the server/makes sense chronologically, you can tell you did your research by mentioning Courland! However, it has not existed for five years! You can find more information on the Nations & Settlement WIKI Page.

 


 

Your application was good, however there are just a few issues that need editing. You have 48 hours to make the changes. Please message me here on the forums, or through my discord once you’ve made the changes, and I’ll take another look at your application.
 

The Wiki has lots of important lore information, please refer to it when making changes. You can also join our Discord, Where you can ask questions to our Community team, and meet other server players.  Taking a look at the New Player Guide here could help you!
 

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Your application has been:

 

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On behalf of the server and Community Team members, I’d like to welcome you to LOTC! As soon as this is posted, you should be whitelisted onto the server. Contact me or make an /creq if there are any issues with whitelisting!

 

Feel free to browse the Wiki and join our Discord. Our Discord is a wonderful place where you can ask questions to our various staff teams, meet other server players, and learn about new roleplay opportunities for all character races! Check out our New Player Guide!

  

I hope you enjoy your time on the server, and if you ever have any questions or need help please feel free to contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Evonpire), or by /msg (Evonpire) in-game.

 

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