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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server-list.com
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: When someone uses outside information on a game to gain an advantage over the other players
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: When a player plays the game in an impossible way that another player can react to, or forcing them to act in a certain way.
    Status: Accepted

Character Name: Thane Alumgold
Character Race: Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 76
Physical Description: Short black hair and beard. Whilst his physique is relatively thin compared to other dwarfs, it is evident that he was once a strong and powerful warr
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  • Your powergaming definition is not quite there.
    • I suggest also looking up power-emoting.
  • Your character bipgraphy is required to contain at least two references to server lore.
    • You can find the lore on the [Wiki] – make sure you read up on the timeline, and find lore relevent to you and your character.
    • You can not be related to legendary characters unless explicit permission is given by said characters player.
    • Flaming swords don’t exist unless created by magic, which you can not have to begin with, nor can you acquire said item at the beginning.
  • Elaborate on your character description a little bit more. Height, weight – a detailed glance at the character.
  • Your interesting facts should be based on character traits, and you should have a positive, negative, and neutral.
    • Things like being strong or being weak, being smart or dumb, are traits

 

Please, make your changes in your own time! Any questions, feel free to PM me on the forums or on discord, Laurelin#0797

And, feel free to join us on the new player discord too: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

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You have attempted to make the changes, but let me help you.

 

  • Your powergaming/power emoting definition still isn’t up to par. Take a moment just to look at other apps, as well as google, to get an idea.
  • As I said, the lore and timeline can be detailed.
    • Take some time- don’t rush. You’ve found some lore references but they’re very out of date. We are currently on the map of Arcas, and your character will have been born on Atlas. Try looking up those maps on the wiki, and finding places relevent.
  • Having both brain and brawn is overpowered.
    • And you contradict it by saying he is weak because of old age.

My advice is, take some time. Don’t rush it. Sit back and consider what you want the character to properly be like. Take a hot minute to develop it, and don’t just rush for the sake of joining in. You’ll have a better roleplay experience if you have some details properly set out.

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  • You are welcome to join the [New Player Discord] if you have not already. It gives you access to the CT members, and nation stewards, as well as other new players, and even event posts from time to time.
  • Make sure you read the [New Player Guide] - it should answer most of your initial burning questions.
  • The forums and the [Wiki] are your best friend when it comes to lore, but do not be afraid to ask for help if you need something clarified.
  • Anyone with a bright pink [CT] tag is ready to help.
  • You can join the help channel by using #h
  • Finally, feel free to PM me on Discord at Laurelin#0797
  • Remember the rules!

 

And importantly, have fun.

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