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Gorvalkion

By Gorvalkion

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: planetminecraft.com
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metagaming is using info you know but your character doesnt
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Doing something your character would not be capable of
    Status: Accepted

Gorvog was an anomaly

Even though he was of or stock and had a penchant for strategy and a keen sense of honor, he was ousted by his peers due to his frailty and lack of true bloodthirst

He was a goblin, and a small one at that. At only four foot two, Gorvog had to, ahem, compensate in other ways. 

First, he learned how to forge, finding comfort in the heat of the flames on his gloved hands

Second, he poured over the literature afforded to him, getting caught up in the history of his people from the literary voice of Aveli, making his speech that of a poetic elf, while carrying the accent of a nasally goblin

As some day, goblins may of been descended between the union of Uruk and elf, and Gorvog is an exemplary example, 

Now twenty one, Gorvog aims to unite his orcish people into a new ethnostate to rival that of the other races. A nation of engineers, artificers, orators, and metalworkers built off efficiency and hierarchy, every orc a cog in Gorvogs system 

 

Character Name: Gorvog
Character Race: Goblin
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 21
Physical Description: Gorvog is a young, idealistic goblin with a penchant for instilling hierarchy and logical thinking
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Hello! Your application has been placed under…

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A) Your character cannot start out knowing magic on the server, so any references to that will need to be removed. 

B) Your meta-gaming definition is incorrect. You can find the proper definition on the Wiki!

C) Your power-gaming definition is incorrect. You can find the proper definition on the Wiki!

D) We are in Atlas, right now, not Anthos. Your character would be far older than the allowed age for goblins. You'll need to update this. 

E) Your interesting facts, like your biography, cannot have references to magic.

F) You will need to include a strength and a weakness in your interesting facts.

 

If any of the reasons you have been denied involve the Wiki, you may use this link to go straight to the home page. The home page has links to the power-emoting and meta-gaming definitions, as well as links to find the server lore you are looking for. Click here to go to the Wiki!

 

Fear not! Being placed under pending does not mean you have been denied. Your application is solid, but could use a few tweaks to help get your application stablized. You have 24 hours to implement the tweaks using the [Edit] feature on the forum. When you have made the changes, contact me (on the forums or on Discord) and I will review the application once more. After 24 hours your application will be either Accepted or Denied. In the case of Denial, you will need to wait 3 hours before making another application.

 

I recommend joining the New Player Discord for assistance in finding answers. It is a helpful tool that will not only help during your application process but also help as a tool once you are implemented on the server.

 

If you have any further questions, please feel free to contact me here on the forums, on Discord (Sakura#8726) or on the server with /msg countessem command. You may also use /atreq to place a ticket for assistance with myself or any of the other Application Team staff!

 

I wish you the best!

 

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Valarin_

Hello! I see you've made edits to your application. Unfortunately there's a few more minor tweaks that need to be sorted out. 

 

1) Your character cannot start out as a member of a seed or clan when you first join the server, unless you have explicit permission from the clan leader. If you do have permission, please link a screenshot of it and tell me the leader's name on Discord so I can confirm this.

2) With the removal of the Gorkil name from your biography you'll be missing a lore reference. You can find the lore on the Wiki!

 

You have 24 more hours to complete the needed changes!

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13 hours ago, countessem (Sakura) said:

Hello! I see you've made edits to your application. Unfortunately there's a few more minor tweaks that need to be sorted out. 

 

1) Your character cannot start out as a member of a seed or clan when you first join the server, unless you have explicit permission from the clan leader. If you do have permission, please link a screenshot of it and tell me the leader's name on Discord so I can confirm this.

2) With the removal of the Gorkil name from your biography you'll be missing a lore reference. You can find the lore on the Wiki!

 

You have 24 more hours to complete the needed changes!

Just removed the Gorkil references. I believe the mention of Aveli would be suitable lore considering its referencing a author within the world

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Hello! Your application has been:
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On behalf of the Application Team and LoTC, I would like to be the first to welcome you to the server and our lovely community! You will be implemented shortly, and during this brief wait, I recommend you read through our Wiki to continue to familiarize yourself with the server lore!

 

I would also recommend you joining the New Player Discord and ask any questions you may have. It is a lovely tool to help you get started in the server and can be a great place to find help with anything you need!

 

If you have any further questions, please feel free to contact me here on the forums, on Discord (Sakura#8726) or on the server with /msg countessem command. You may also use /atreq to place a ticket for assistance with myself or any of the other Application Team staff!

 

I wish you the best!

 

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