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    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: cheating bye useing out of game items to let peeps know about stuff that they had no idea about before then or hearing someone a few rooms down
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: like trying to attack someoine with no resistance or have some effect with that persons charicter is some way with no resistance
    Status: Accepted

came to the kingdom of hanseti-Ruska hoping that I could make a living off of 2 awkwardly placed types of people after hearing the people there most contributed to the religion church of canon selling item that might have some worth but soon got consumed in the military of the area and got training in 1 handed swords and he already knew how to use a halberd

I was not used to all the cold weather but soon got used to the weather

 

hoping to soon get in the small counsel he left trying to get away from the safety and make his life mean something

 

my family as first in a country called the realm of Skjoldier  and had lived a descent life style but they wanted more for me my mother Senna and father Grotto worked there tails off to get me across to the country Atlas my sister Elena had died at the age of 1 and 5 months but I use that to push me forward

 

 


Character Name: argo broodstorm
Character Race: Farfolk
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: black hair browneyes large eyes no mouth shifty skin darker skin

Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Pending.

 

Your application has been placed under pending for the following reasons.

- I'd like for you to provide some more details, for example:

   - Origin, background, family

  - Personality traits, strengths (not just physical), and flaws

  - Why did your persona move to Haense?

 

You'll have 24 hours to make the needed changes/edits. If you think you'll need additional time, please let me know. If you have any questions, feel free to ask me or another member of the application team and we'll be happy to answer those questions for you. Here is link to the New Player Discord where you can ask questions here as well, and members of the staff team along with general players can help you out: https://discord.gg/jXC5SX7.

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Ok just one more thing -

 

Farfolk are typically people who aren't what we'd consider Caucasian in the real world. I would recommend that you instead use Highlander or simply Human as your race to fit the skin provided along with the name of the town you provided - Although based upon your persona's age, it would make more sense for them to belong to a city/nation already established upon Atlas.

 

Please make the suggested edits however you believe so.

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Ok, final thing. 

 

"my family as first in a country called Edenborough and had lived a descent life style but they wanted more for me my mother Senna and father Grotto worked there tails off to get me across to the country Atlas" - I highly advise you change Edenborough to a location that does exist in LoTC. If you still wish to be from somewhere outside of Atlas, refer to the following found in this https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/forum/910-starting-locations-in-the-mortal-realm/.

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Accepted! Welcome to LoTC.

 

You'll be whitelisted soon enough, until then take the time to read through the various roleplay posts on the forums. Once you've been whitelisted, spend some time roleplaying in cloud temple to get a hang of RP and how the chat commands work. Once again if you've got questions, let me know!

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