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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: It's when you use information you got from the outside of the game/role play and use it in the game/roleplay. Ex: I was roleplaying with someone and had shared information with them out of the roleplay and they used that information in game against my per
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Abusing your power to either guide the roleplay to a path the others aren't willing to follow or slaughter everyone you're roleplaying with.
    Status: Accepted

She was born in Markev, In the kingdom of Haeseti-Ruska, under the reign of King Sigmar Lothar. Her parents were born in the sleetfells, on a small farm. Due to the Vaeyl's snow storm her parents could not farm their land, making it really hard for them to get any minas to support her. Because her parents could not raise her she was put in the orphanage. She stayed there, learning the common language and about the Canonist Faith. She bored herself almost daily as she did her daily activities. At her 18th birthday she was released from the orphanage, she set out to find her purpose and something that will not bore her.


Character Name: Élyse.
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Uneblievably pale skin, dark brown hair and eyes. Curvaceous body hidden by several layers of clothing and a fairly good looking face. 5' 7"
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Changed Status to Under Review

1yPM0YR.png You are almost there but you could use some help.

  1. Your interesting facts to be like one to three words, I would request you take a look at them and make them into sentences. 
  2.  your skin looks like it has bunny ears because of the white and pink stuff, I would request you please find one that is more lore friendly, and is easier to tell what it actually is.
  3. Your biography is nice it just seems short and copy and pasted. I would request you go back and add more to it. If you need help here is the wiki. https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

(You have 24 hours to fix these few changes, until it is automatically denied, unless you are actively working on it.) If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw https://imgur.com/jAPlD7R

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