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Luna_Bunny101
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    Referral: planetminecraft.com
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: meta gaming is when you would use external options to affect the game (eg) someone saying something to you in real life that a player in game will do something bad and the player (me) should no know this information
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: power gaming is when interacting with games or RPG with aim to go towards a certain goal (eg) (atmosphere/ telling the story)
    Status: Accepted

Luna Darkmoore was born in a village near Ravenhold

Learned at a very young age how to fight and become a very strong dark elf from her father. Her father trained her to be strong and willing to do anything in the battlefield, she became very strong after a few months of fighting so her father made her a dagger that she now uses in every fight she is very fast with a blade and can knock and enemy out in minutes. She now spends her time going from cities and settlements finding more dark elf's along the way to befriend. she loves her reading and spends most of the times in cities and towns at the libraries reading and learning. Luna follows after her fathers trade making weapons thats where her creativity flows she loves making items to sell along the way on her travels making her a few coin here and there to keep her going.
 


Character Name: Luna Darkmoore
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 19
Physical Description: Blue,purple wavy long hair/purple eyes, wearing a black torn dress with grey skin and masculine/carrying her dagger
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Changed Status to Under Review

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Hello! Although this can be contributed to a quick fix, I have to halt you here. Primarily for the definition of power-gaming. Although what you have is a good measure to know, it isn't exactly correct. I just wish you to fix up the definition and expand on it for as best as you can. You can find an expanded range to assist you across all media of the internet, or scour through our own wiki which explains it here; http://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/ . 

 

With this little fix-up you'll be swinging on the server in no time which we'll be happy to company you to join.  If you do however need any assistance you can message me on the forums here or go to the new player discord found here: https://discord.gg/uCwe7rv , alternatively if you just wish to private message me my discord ID is here: ttwesten#9293

 

Thank you for applying and I do hope you can fix the application up within 24 hours for when i'll review the application next. If you want a faster review, please don't fret to message me.

 

Also a little side-note, make sure you role-play correctly on the server, especially with combat knowledge, also for a dark-elf the skin you've linked is somewhat fare, if you can edit the skin to represent this or bring up the reason why, that'll be good.

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Power Gaming: the character is acting out or doing something realistically they wouldn't normally be able to do for example ( Luna: slices through (orcs) huge metal chest plate of armor) Luna wouldn't be able to get her sword through  the armor. something more realistic would be ( Luna: attempts to slices the orcs armor and fails and falling to the floor as he hits her from the side)

 

SKIN) i have made her skin tone darker grey and fixed the eyes to a dark red and and i have also made her hair a sliver/grey and her flower crown now has red flowers instead of white. I hope these fixes are sufficient please feel free to let me know and im happy to make changes :) 

 

thanks from Luna_Bunny101 

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