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Lomion grew up strong and disciplined. He always explored the forests that he deeply valued, thus becoming wiser everyday. The unforgiving cold weather did not upset him, he accepted it. Every now and then, wanderers would come up to Lomion in the forests, while he was meditating, asking for help, which he always provided. One day, 3 black bearded men asked Lomion to help them reach their boat, saying they were merchants, trading across the lands. As Lomion was showing them the way to the harbour, the wanderers managed to capture him. Lomion was 300 years old at the time, wise and intelligent, but not as strong as other snow elves. For 37 years he served the 3 pirates on their ship, in chains, suffering day after day, thinking of a way of escaping captivity, and have revenge. One night, one of the bearded men got very sick, and the other 2 were aiding him with medicine, thus leaving the ship with no captain for some minutes. Lomion was washing the deck when he saw that, so he ran to the front and took the wheel, sailing the ship into a massive rock, sinking everyone, including his fellow slaves.

He was hungry and restless, thus drowning in the salty water of the sea, awaiting his death, thinking it is better to die a rogue, a fugitive, rather than a chained slave of mad pirates. As his mind was fading away while looking at the dawn, he was sure he would not see sunlight again, but somehow wakes up on wet earth, on the isle of Atlas, hungry and weak, thinking he is cursed to be a wandering soul for eternity. He realises he is not dead while he walks through the woods in search of help, with hope.


Character Name: Lomion
Character Race: SNOW_ELF
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 337
Physical Description: A small portion of the face. He covers his scars. His blue eyes show the tears of the sea in which he served as a slave. A wise, but still weak being.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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The first thing I want to bring up, you clicked no to not agreeing to the rules.

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Secondary; your definitions for powergaming / metagaming although the example you used is good, are incorrect in some aspects. If possible could you write out in three sentences what each are, you have the roleplaying one already set, just the metagaming and powergaming one please.

 

Third, your biography, sadly we do not have these 'washed up characters' with no backstory whatsoever. I can offer you some inspiration however, your backstory can be a pirate crews slave, served to row the boat until your last voyage, when the boat engaged into combat you managed to escape but not without injury as the mast of the ship collapsed near you causing a wave of water to submerge you down... taking in much of the salt water it caused you to black out and have memory issues as you awake on the isle of Atlas. 

 

Don't take this word for word however, make it your own or try a completely different rout. 

 

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Fourth, your skin is. Not acceptable on the server. If you wish you can take a look here: 

and find a wonderful skin to use. Otherwise try to find a more roleplay friendly skin.

 

You have 24 hours to fix your application, goodluck. PM when finished. 

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