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Mandy_Kittycat
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Youtube
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: when you talk on discord oocly and tell someone your being attacked by someone
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: if the person declares there more powerful then you and punch you out in one hit
    Status: Accepted

Character Name: Ally moon
Character Race: Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: Ally moon is a dark colored skin elf with red eyes and white hair her clothes are black and red her shoes are black
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Hi! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Although there are some changes you need to make, so don’t worry!

 

Your biography lacks depth and a proper lore reference. Make it one full paragraph minimal.

Your metagaming and powergaming information is off and needs to be changed to show your properly know what they mean.

One of your three interesting character facts needs to be a weakness, also make them full sentences.

Your character description needs to describe your skin.

3'0 isn't an acceptable height for an elf. Please check it out here. https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Elves

 

Make sure you do them within 24 hours, or the app will be denied unless i am contacted!

 

Whenever you are done, or have any questions.  feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message ZachsSlayer! If i’m not around there, add me on discord at Zach#5794.

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

 

While you wait, you can join the new player discord here :https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

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Hi, you got accepted! Very exciting and good job on the app. I welcome you to the community of LotC!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Zach#5794]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message ZachsSlayer to find me in game. If i’m not around you can also use the new player discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

You can also use /atreq ingame and me or my fellow AT members can help you that way!

I’ll see you out there!

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