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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: when you talk on discord oocly and tell someone your being attacked by someone
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: if the person declares there more powerful then you and punch you out in one hit
    Status: Accepted

 

Ally is an elf, she stands at 6 feet and she has 100 mina. Her weakness is her curiosity it gets the best of her and can get her often into trouble. she is a good fighter and she knows how to take down her enemies . She has a mom and dad and two siblings which are a boy and girl elf. Their names are Alexander and Lilly. her moms name is Rose and her dad is James they live in a small village, but ally wanted to go adventuring out when she turned twenty and she hoped to make a friend or two on the way. She has dark skin red eyes and white hair. If a enemies comes by she will do what she can to take them out so her and her family will be safe until the next time another comes around.Ally will get annoyed by anyone when she is off on her own she has a short temper so if you make her mad she will leave you in the dust if your one of her friends but if your a foe and shes mad she will try to kill you on the spot.She will someday go back to her village to tell her fellow elfs what she has seen and learned but till that time comes she will do what she can to help others out unless there her foe. She often visited the dominion sometimes for short periods.


Character Name: Ally moon
Character Race: Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: Ally moon is a dark colored skin elf with red eyes and white hair her clothes are black and red her shoes are black
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Hi! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Although there are some changes you need to make, so don’t worry!

 

Your biography lacks depth and a proper lore reference. Make it one full paragraph minimal.

Your metagaming and powergaming information is off and needs to be changed to show your properly know what they mean.

One of your three interesting character facts needs to be a weakness, also make them full sentences.

Your character description needs to describe your skin.

3'0 isn't an acceptable height for an elf. Please check it out here. https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Elves

 

Make sure you do them within 24 hours, or the app will be denied unless i am contacted!

 

Whenever you are done, or have any questions.  feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message ZachsSlayer! If i’m not around there, add me on discord at Zach#5794.

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

 

While you wait, you can join the new player discord here :https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

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Hi, you got accepted! Very exciting and good job on the app. I welcome you to the community of LotC!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Zach#5794]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message ZachsSlayer to find me in game. If i’m not around you can also use the new player discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

You can also use /atreq ingame and me or my fellow AT members can help you that way!

I’ll see you out there!

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