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Markus_Bane

By Markus_Bane

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: In Role play, we call metagame the actions that the characters according to a situation which they do not know. This metagame is often considered as of the cheating.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: PowerGaming, we call Powergaming the Action that are not supposed to be able to do irp by certain characters, or forcing the rp our own way without letting any chances to an opponent to counter our attacks.
    Status: Accepted

Atlas (1626- 1649)

 

I formerly had a name as everybody, but it has no more the slightest importance for me especially as it reminds me a painful past which I shall have preferred to forget.
I was the son of a little farmer of an unknown town, in the Border of Velaris, an old alcoholic and an amateur of illegal drugs.
Because of his addiction, he got into debt with the local underworld and while I approached my eleventh anniversary, sold me as slave to a rich heartlander trader very influencing.
My father had raised me alone. My mother died by giving birth to me .
I guess that I didn't meant a lot to him...
but, when the person who raised you, exchanges you for some stick of drugs, it is not the despair but the hatred that settles down in your heart.
During last years to serve my master and his family I got acquainted with his daughter Kaasha a beautiful and soft brilliant girl .
she was the only one who showed kindness considers while I underwent ill-treatment from my masters.
Her naivety amazed me in view of her intelligence.. there she saw remedy I saw diseases there she saw my future I saw a dagger in her father's neck...
during the next 5 years my body started changing... because of my hard labour I was becoming stronger and stronger every day!
I was supporting this life.. because I was thinking to her... loving her no matter how hard my life was.
this make two years now I served the family of my beloved when her father discovered our platonic love which I maintained with his daughter.
Then, he decided to punish me by cutting me my tongue, he judged that I had no utility of it.
At the age of sixteen, I had to kill for the first time.
While the incandescent blade approached my face I seized the knife hidden in my back Kaasha gave it to me for my birthday.
I sliced his throat without hesitations.
The noise of the blood which flowed abundantly along his neck, as well as its smell made me shiver. I listened to the sound of his agony, I observed the life leaving the eyes and I took some pleasure there lasted whether a few seconds but there were the seconds the most intense of all my life.
After I ran away from my murder I travelled a lot. I had to stole or even kill to survive.
one day... after seing the beautiful city of Senntisten...
I couldn't just stand with my life anymore...I needed to change to erase my past and...
to begin a whole new life.... without thinking because of my past and old condition.
it made me strong. It made me a new person.
I am not anymore the little crying boy... I am a man. I am a free man
and this city will hear me!

Character Name: Celembor
Character Race: SNOW_ELF
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 23
Physical Description: At first glance a lot of people would consider him quite attractive for the way that he looks.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Hello! Although this can be contributed to a quick fix, I have to halt you here. Primarily for the definition of power-gaming. Although what you have is a good measure to know, it isn't exactly correct. I just wish you to fix up the definition and expand on it for as best as you can. You can find an expanded range to assist you across all media of the internet, or scour through our own wiki which explains it here; http://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/ . 

 

Added on, your biography mentions a lot of your character however not of a city name, date or time upon the server. If you can try to include any/all of these within your biography you'll be on the road to success in joining the server. You can find this with the link above.

 

With this little fix-up you'll be swinging on the server in no time which we'll be happy to company you to join.  If you do however need any assistance you can message me on the forums here or go to the new player discord found here: https://discord.gg/uCwe7rv , alternatively if you just wish to private message me my discord ID is here: ttwesten#9293

 

Thank you for applying and I do hope you can fix the application up within 24 hours for when i'll review the application next. If you want a faster review, please don't fret to message me.

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