MentalStatus

Overall, a really good read for a first application. You’ve added plenty of references for lore in your biography- kudos there! Otherwise, there’s very little I’d ask you to change.

• Your powergaming definition, while not wrong entirely, is a little oddly worded. In essence, it is the player being unfair in roleplay, not the character. A simple act of directly making an action, rather than attempting an action, is a standard example of powergaming.
• I’m a tad worried that your interesting facts will leave the character overly demure.
  • Too trusting,
  • Scared to make eye contact- gets better over time.

They leave little to be desired, and don’t really tick the boxes of negative and neutral traits/facts for me. Instead perhaps consider something else. Is she weak and not a fighter? That, there, could be your negative.

Please, make your changes in your own time! Any questions, feel free to PM me on the forums or on discord, Laurelin#0797

And, feel free to join us on the new player discord too: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

Thank you! Reading back I definitely see my odd wording. I wen’t ahead and changed my facts to hopefully more clearly state the positive, neutral, and bad.

You had little in the way of changes to make, but thank you for going back through and fixing it up.

Keep in mind that human history is extensive; remember your timelines, which worlds and cities existed for your character and so on, and you should be good to get yourself in game! You can easilly pick up bits and bobs of lore as you go, and never be afraid to as anyone for help.

You can find [CT] members easilly with their bright pink tag.

Here’s some reading for you:

[Arcas]

[Atlas]

[Empire of Man]

[Human]

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