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milliancole
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server-list.com
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metagaming is when you make decisions based on your own knowledge of the game, rather than your character's. It is against the rules
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Powergaming is when your own roleplay encroaches on other players roleplay. An example could be in combat- if a player says "I kill the other player" rather than "I try to kill the other player." It is also against the rules.
    Status: Accepted

Haz hails from San’Kala, of the War Nation of Krugmar. He trained under the Raguk clan, but came to be considered a whelp. In many ways, he did not measure up to the other uruk. Physically, he is more slender than one might expect from an uruk. Moreover he did not share nearly as much bloodthirst as Raguk are typically known for. To make matters worse, he lost an eye during battle, putting him at a further disadvantage and causing him to be in recovery for an extended period. Beginning to regain his wellness, Haz worried that he would be culled, in accordance to uruk tradition, for his weakness. In a moment of cowardice, he fled from his home fearing for his life. Having nothing but the clothes upon his back, the young uruk wandered the wilderness alone. Having some survival knowledge from his warrior training, Haz managed to survive in a forest for some time, until he was found cold and hungry by a goblin named Lazmir. The old goblin (my irl friend Softecat, who is sending an application at the same time as me) was unaffiliated with any clan, as LOTC lore states that some goblins are. Lazmir had lived a solitary, nomadic lifestyle for a long time. Having a missing leg himself, he took pity on Haz’s disability and the two orcs became fast friends. They learned they shared many more similarities as well – hailing from the same clan, and having a similar outlook on the nature of violence. Haz and Lazmir now travel together in order to help Haz grow in strength and bravery, and to help regain his lost honor.


Character Name: Haz
Character Race: Orc
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Around 7' tall. Somewhat less bulky than other uruk, but by no means scrawny. Youthful face. Scar on bridge of nose. Eyepatch.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

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"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Changed Status to Under Review

1yPM0YR.png You are almost there, but you can use a little bit of help.

  1. Your biography is good, the only thing that is the issue as it doesn't have any like city names or lore, its just about the orcs. Could you please add some.

(You have 24 hours to fix these few changes, until it is automatically denied, unless you are actively working on it.) If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 

 

 

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Hey, thanks for looking at my application. I’m having difficulty figuring out what the different cities are under raguk control. I’m looking at the wiki right now, but I’m not having a ton of luck.

18 minutes ago, Cornivore said:

Changed Status to Under Review

1yPM0YR.png You are almost there, but you can use a little bit of help.

  1. Your biography is good, the only thing that is the issue as it doesn't have any like city names or lore, its just about the orcs. Could you please add some.

(You have 24 hours to fix these few changes, until it is automatically denied, unless you are actively working on it.) If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 

 

 

I updated it with more specific location description. I hope this is enough! If not, could you point me toward more specific information you’d like to see?

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