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Morchanar
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Asking for help on a 3rd party app such as Skype, TS, and discord.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Forcing something on another person, said in rules something like "Cut Adrians arm, severing it completely" vs "cut adrians arm, aiming to sever it"
    Status: Accepted

Name is Morchanar Darkin, he was born in the city of Velunor and was raised with a sword in hand. He was trained to the bone with the sword, bow, and book and pen, he has a strong hatred for the Mori as he payed more attention to that history than many other legends and stories. He has a missing older brother but has no knowledge of him whatsoever. He started Martial arts and weapon training at a young age and never fit in with anyone due to his abnormal body.  Unfortunately during the end of his training and the nearing of his coming of age, his parents were innocently murdered in the crossfire of a fight when he was just 50, leaving him and his weapon and training to survive on his own. Having a very... competitive and aggressive nature he yearned for a job as a soldier or mercenary. For 50 years he worked as a mercenary and helping whenever he can. Despite his very aggressive nature he is very intelligent and assertive along with being very adaptive to the situation. He hopes to learn the way of magic and the arts of blacksmithing and carpentry and yearns for a teacher in those areas of expertise. He is hot tempered but is loyal and will do his best to make who he works for happy.


Character Name: Morchanar Darkin
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 100
Physical Description: White hair just above shoulder length put in a nice design. A yellow left eye and a light blue right eye and a scar going from his yellow eye to cheek
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Upon review, your application has been accepted! Welcome to Lord of the Craft! If you require any assistance getting settled on the server you can always contact a member of the Application Team or utilize the LotC New Player Discord. Your application definitely met the standards of the server, though I am going to suggest two minor edits to tweak into your character for sake of ease. The first is the eye; instead of it being magic you should go with alchemy, perhaps a mage tricked him into drinking an eye color changing potion. Magic doesn’t function in a way that’ll change your eye color as you wrote. Second, instead of it being “girl” he’s nervous around, I would suggest him just being nervous in most social environments, as your fact creates what could be an uncomfortable standard for female roleplayers. Either way, have a fantastic day and enjoy your stay with us on Lord of the Craft!

 

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