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Nevla

Nevla

By Nevla

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Using information your character does not know. An example is being in a Discord call or chat with friends and getting information from them you would not know otherwise.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Forcing an action or another form of life upon someone or something while roleplaying. Example: Jace atatcks Nevla, stabbing him through the heart and killing him. Non-powergaming Example: Jace jabs at Nevla, trying to pierce him through the heart to kill
    Status: Accepted

Born in Santegia. Family was not poor, but not rich either, fairly happy childhood, well educated. At the age of seven his mother and older sister (by two years) were murdered and his father remarried to a mother who would physically and verbally abuse him. By the age of ten he was very exclusive and almost always isolated. The day before his fifteenth birthday he ran from home to make a new life. He met a man who offered him work for food and shelter, so he worked in the fields of a farm and lived in a fair house, but got no more education while he was working for the man. Then the man went to pick up food and never returned home, and he's been a wandering orphan ever since, stealing and deceiving to make his way in the universe. His first experience with putting people in a trance was when he was almost 18, he was arguing with a man about a price and said something about the person at the store nearby, and he kept stretching the lie until the man could do nothing but focus on his words and think about the person running the other store. When the clerk went to argue with the other store owner, he stole what he was arguing over (bread) and walked off, leaving the two store owners to bicker. His words have a slightly entrancing touch to them, but without the use of magic. He lies and makes the person so focused on his words they can do nothing BUT think about what he is saying.

Character Name: Nevla Kane
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Dark red hair, almost blood red, has a wound over his left eye, the right one being an enchanting blue, light tan skin. Very manipulative.

Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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winterblessing

Changed Status to Under Review

Your application has been placed on:

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-I recommend adding a bit more length to your biography. Perhaps reference the lore one more time, or add to your character's backstory.

-What do you mean by your character can 'manipulate people until they are almost in a trance?' If this is through the use of magic, you will not be allowed to apply to the server with it. I would recommend explaining more how he achieves this in your biography.

 

You have 24 hours to make the above changes. Once finished, send me a message or comment on this application.

If you need any assistance, don't hesitate to send me a message. You can also join the new player discord if you have any questions! https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

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winterblessing

Your application has been:

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You will be implemented shortly! Please remember that you cannot force people into a trance, as that would be powergaming. If you somehow find a way to do this with magic, then feel free to use it appropriately.

I would recommend joining the new player discord if you need any assistance: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

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