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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Players use out of character knowledge that their character would not know to influence their actions and choices. Such as seeing someone's tag and targeting them through a wall without physically seeing the player.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: When someone forces situations onto another without letting the other react to it. This would be like A hits B without letting B try dodging it.
    Status: Accepted

Hiro Takarada always dreamed.  He dreamed in his home nation of Diguo.  He dreamed under the stars.  He dreamed on land.  He dreamed on the water.  He dreamed of the stories his parents told of far away lands and places outside their country.  He loved listening to and reading stories of legends, other peoples and cultures.  His favorite stories were of Shi Zhu Huang’s rule, increasing the size of the Distorian navy, supporting the exploration of the seas, discovering many islands, and opening diplomatic relations with foreign entities for the first time.  He admired the first Emperor Cui Shi Huang’s speed of conquering all the neighboring states around Huang guo within 50 years, and forming Diguo, which is still surviving to this day.  He liked the story of Zhu Yu ascending the throne as Emperor Shi Zhudi and founding the Shi chao dynasty, lasting 500 years and is still strong to this day, brought about peace to the empire, the vassal states, and with rival factions.

 

His father told him the story of Chi Shi Huang’s assassination leading to unrest of the empire as pretenders claimed and fought for the throne.  He warned of backstabbers and the importance of protecting one’s self.  

 

Hiro learned the art of calligraphy from his mother and discovered that the delicate strokes of a simple brush speaks more than the strike of a steel sword.  He learned the art of sword dance from books and stories, while his twin sister, Kasumi Takarda focused mainly on combat.  

 

Hiro’s passion was in seafaring and learning how to steer a junk ship.  He would often force his sister to come with him to the docks as he spoke with sailors and fishermen about the creation, workings, and maintenance of their ships.  

 

Hiro Takarada wished to see the world and sneaked on a boat to Arcas, not knowing that his sister followed him on board.  During a great storm, they were pushed into the sea by the force of the waves slamming into the boat.

 

He woke up with his sister in a temple of cloud and mist. 


Character Name: Hiro Takarada
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: Hiro is 5'6" in height, has black hair and dark brown eyes, wears his hair up in a knot, and dresses in comfortable blue and white clothing
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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As you can can see, you are almost done! I just need you to change a few things

 

1 you are missing two lore referrals in your application. These can be nation names, events or history. The name of the continent itself does not count

 


 

If you need any more assistance you can contact me on the forums, through discord or in-game! My discord is (chaos#7283) and if you find me on the server, you can simply do /msg chaosgamer_. I strongly suggest joining the new player discord as well in case you need assistance or advice from other players or staff members → https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

I also recommend you looking over the wiki so you can find good lore to include in your application ?

 

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Welcome! as you can see, your application has been accepted, you did a good job making it!


 

If you need any more assistance you can contact me on the forums, through discord or in-game! My discord is (chaos#7283) and if you find me on the server, you can simply do /msg chaosgamer_. I strongly suggest joining the new player discord as well in case you need assistance or advice from other players or staff members → https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

I also recommend reading the new player guide!

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/179894-new-player-guide/?pagecomment1690465=1

If you need any help from another community member, you can do /creq (message) on the server ?AjTm9a1frrN5B18au_qbN9xUHUPuTiUdUG2Na7ihjesNaOzGeGqbnjVXhGW_S1H9d5HVRSWiZEjnyX-h7M0VeB8DcHBn32aef0IhsUa11V1uNnxBoYUNYol-XKiZs34eWZYvvYUW

 

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