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Olivia_valentina

By Olivia_valentina

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: A player using information that there character should or would not know
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: being able to do something your character should not have been able to do
    Status: Accepted

Bellas Qinhice up in the Princedom of fenn with her Mom, Dad and little Brother. Her mother works as a university professor and teaches magic to her students. Her father as a military officer to help keep the community safe. While her father is ok with the whole fighting aspect of the military, she is more interested in trying to keep the people in her town happy and educated, i guess u could say she takes after her mom. her father has always inspired her to help the community.  Though most snow elves are very progressive, since her parents are quite old school, she tends to stick to the rules and does not like change. This had caused her to get into many fights with the towns elf considering that she does not like to change. Though many people like her because she is kind and sweet and she is willing to change to better  the community if that is what it comes down to.

Character Name: Bellas Qinhice
Character Race: SNOW_ELF
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 87
Physical Description: She'd stand at 5'11 feet tall. Her hair would be up to her shoulders. Her eyes would be light blue.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Hello! Your application has been placed under…

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A) Your biography is good but could use some tweaks. You seem to have a semi-lore reference in your biography, but I'd like to see a little bit more of a lore reference. There are several Princedoms in our lore, so which one are you referencing? I hope this helps flesh out your biography a bit.

B) Your character cannot start out knowing magic on the server, so any reference to knowing spells or magic will have to be removed.

C) Your power-gaming definition is incorrect. You can find the proper definition on the Wiki! Please remember to write it in your own words!

D) Your interesting facts should include a weakness and a strength. This can be a physical, mental or emotional weakness, and makes for a well-rounded character!

 

If any of the reasons you have been denied involve the Wiki, you may use this link to go straight to the home page. The home page has links to the power-emoting and meta-gaming definitions, as well as links to find the server lore you are looking for. Click here to go to the Wiki!

 

Fear not! Being placed under pending does not mean you have been denied. Your application is solid, but could use a few tweaks to help get your application stablized. You have 24 hours to implement the tweaks using the [Edit] feature on the forum. When you have made the changes, contact me (on the forums or on Discord) and I will review the application once more. After 24 hours your application will be either Accepted or Denied. In the case of Denial, you will need to wait 3 hours before making another application.

 

I recommend joining the New Player Discord for assistance in finding answers. It is a helpful tool that will not only help during your application process but also help as a tool once you are implemented on the server.

 

If you have any further questions, please feel free to contact me here on the forums, on Discord (Sakura#8726) or on the server with /msg countessem command. You may also use /atreq to place a ticket for assistance with myself or any of the other Application Team staff!

 

I wish you the best!

 

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Valarin_

Hello! Your application has been:
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On behalf of the Application Team and LoTC, I would like to be the first to welcome you to the server and our lovely community! You will be implemented shortly, and during this brief wait, I recommend you read through our Wiki to continue to familiarize yourself with the server lore!

 

I would also recommend you joining the New Player Discord and ask any questions you may have. It is a lovely tool to help you get started in the server and can be a great place to find help with anything you need!

 

If you have any further questions, please feel free to contact me here on the forums, on Discord (Sakura#8726) or on the server with /msg countessem command. You may also use /atreq to place a ticket for assistance with myself or any of the other Application Team staff!

 

I wish you the best!

 

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