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    Referral: Through a Friend
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: using information that your person would not have, you must hear about a situation in person to know about it.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: the act of determining the outcome of a situation ( i let the arrow fly and it hits its target dead center) when it should be ( i let the arrow fly aiming for the center)
    Status: Accepted

Onvyr Torlen

 

being born in the capital Taliyna'maehr, Onvyr was the first born, growing up he was always eager to lean new things and see new places. Politics interested him at a young age and would always try to stay up to date as much as possible always hopping one day he would be able to have a a leading role himself.

At a young age Onvyr had moved with other high elf’s to help construct the new city of Okarn'thilln.

Onvyr was proud to attend the Eternal college, he had a love of learning and studied for years wanting to know everything from Arcane magic to science and was never fully fulfilled with his learning. 

During his study’s at the college Onvyr’s father had been killed by what was said to be a monster attack when his father was out of the city, this lead to his distrust of the human race since it was a human who delivered the news about his fathers death Onvyr never truly believed in what happened. Already disliking the other races for being half-breeds, lawless, and inferior and would almost certainly not have any acquaintance with any of them, this only added the humans to this list. Onvyr is a very proud elf, generally more of a pacifist he is not afraid to get his hands dirty if he is or his people is insulted.

But after the political difficulties that had plagued the city, Onvyr had hoped Cenwall Maeyr’onn would be able to keep the high elf’s and there beautiful city to remain together and united. When ultimately things did not get better Onvyr left following the many other elf’s leaving the city to the city of men, to much disgust and knowing it was only temporary. 

When Onvyr heard that Dimaethor Visaj was leading the high elf’s to a new start he was eager to leave the land of men, to a new beginning a new promise Fi’halen.


Character Name: Onvyr Torlen
Character Race: High Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 82
Physical Description: Onvyr's appearance is well dressed in a black coat with shorter dirty-blond hair and blue eyes 6’4” and weigh of 141 lb
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Ø  Please expand a bit upon your bio, making it atleast one decently sized paragraph long.

Ø  Seeing as Okarn’thilln was founded in 1642 your character could not have been born there, seeing as he was born in 1642 (right now the roleplay year is around 1706).

 

 

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