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    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: not adhering to your in-game character's knowledge (i.e. utilizing facts and ideas they wouldn't otherwise know about)
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: roleplaying actions that are generally impossible by your character, or forcing other characters to take part in contradictory actions
    Status: Accepted

 

Due to the Elsinfhar’s long familial history of prestigious scientists living in Normandor, Alys had been expected to become a prominent scientist by both of her parents. Early on Alys and her sister Fineen were sent away from their hometown, Haelun’or, where her parents moved to in order to teach at Haelun’or College, to a school focusing primarily on training younger students in studying the science of the magical arts in the city of Taliyna’maehr. After years go by, Alys’s scientific interests are discovered to lie in studying the theory of arcane magics, specifically the renegade theory of using electrical magic in an attempt to control the brain and animate artificial life. In an attempt to hide this fascination from her parents, Alys attempts mastering the classic physical sciences, as a means of fulfilling her parents expectations. After time goes on, Alys is able to get by with her knowledge of the classics long enough to get her into Haelun’or College. Once there, Alys is encouraged by her professors to do research in the area that interests her. Upon hearing this, Alys takes a role as a junior researcher under a professor studying the theory of generating electrical magic. As her professor goes on leave for a year, Alys is temporarily positioned as the head of the lab. Unable to control her curiosity, Alys attempts to convince some of the members of her lab to attempt controlling the minds of small animals. Convinced that it was a futile an immoral idea, many of the members of the lab left. Failure after failure led Alys down a dark path, where she became obsessed with her theory of mind control. When the professor came back and discovered Alys’s experiments, in a fit of rage, he informs her parents who attempt to disown her by destroying her inheritance and family name. Simultaneously, he notified the college board who decide to banish her from the university. Years after Alys fails to recruit others in her beliefs, Alys and her sister FIneen flee to the outskirts of an abandoned town, where an old professor of hers mentioned they might find the knowledge they’re looking for.

 

This is where the story begins.

 


Character Name: Alys Elsinfhar
Character Race: High Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 163
Physical Description: Alys has fair skin with long blonde hair. Often wears traditional female High Elf attire. On the lighter side around 110lbs, 5.8ft tall.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Hm, it seems your IP is linked to another registration,, you have applied as sisters, so I would assume that perhaps you are sisters irl also? If you would be able to contact me at duckybreb#4385 on discord to resolve this, it would be greatly appreciated ❤️ 

 

Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

- Mm, you’re powergaming and metagaming definitions are good; but if you’d be able to expand upon your powergaming definition and give examples for each, that would be fantastic! Here are links to the correct definitions, just be sure not to plagiarise ❤️

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming
https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Power-emoting

- I’m afraid your character cannot know/have an affinity in any certain magic, or have any sort of magical skill. All magic must be learnt once accepted, taught by teachers in game. Please do correct this, and make sure to still include 2 lore references and at least 6/7 detailed sentences! ❤️

 

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message puffables! If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at duckybreb#4385.

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

 

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the new player discord here :https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

- Your bio still seems to include usage of magic, and discoveries, experiments and achievements that your character wouldn’t be able to have accomplished during their backstory – its generally better to have all achievements and important discoveries done through roleplay once on the server. While it is likely that your character may have attended the Eternal College, it’s unlikely that they would have attained such things as you’ve said in your bio (mainly as that’s not quite how electrical evocation works,,). If you could edit this, that would be lovely ❤️

- The current year is 1727, your character being 163 years old would have been born in 1564, during Vailor, only 7 years before the move to Axios. While its quite probable that her parents and family may have lived in Normandor during the map of Asulon, your character would not have been born there. The main high elven city of Vailor was Lin’sulan, then Taliyna’maehr in Asulon (as you’ve mentioned in your bio, very nice! ? ), then in Atlas first Okarn’thilln until its destruction, after that Fi’halen. The current high elven city of Haelun’or in Arcas is Berr’lin. I hope you’ll find some of this info useful! ^-^

- You wouldn’t have been able to travel to the ruins of an old high elven city, as that would have been on a different map that the Descendant races have now migrated from. The current map is Arcas, meaning that anywhere they would travel to would be there. Here are links to a few wiki pages and sources you might find useful ❤️

WIKI

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Haelun'or

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Electric_Evocation

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/97527-the-ultimate-high-elven-guide-of-high-elven-knowings/?tab=comments#comment-883671

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/82725-tradition-and-silver/

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=High_Elves

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Taliyna'maehr

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/182829-haelunor-settlement-guide/

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/78799-elven-sentences/

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message puffables! If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at duckybreb#4385.

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

 

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the new player discord here :https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

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Hi there, as you can see, you have been accepted onto the server! Well done on your application, you’re doing great! So now, I welcome you to the wonderful community of LotC!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [duckybreb#4385]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message puffables to find me in game. If I’m not around you can also use the new player discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

You can also use /creq ingame and me or my fellow CT members can help you that way!

Lastly, here is the new player guide, I recommend you look over it!

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=New_Player_Guide

Have a great time roleplaying, and I look forwards to seeing you around in future!

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