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By Xavi

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Youtube
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Using information that your character hasnt yet found out to your advantage
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Presuming or declaring that a character's action is successful without giving the other player the freedom to act on his or her own prerogative. "Matthew kills Jared in one mighty slash"
    Status: Accepted

Michael was born to two blacksmiths, Mary Jane, and Clifford Jane. He grew up in a cozy village on the outskirts of town. Michael was an only child with a difficult childhood. His father, Clifford, was extremely abusive to his mother and him which was practically traumatic. He had to go to the mines from the rise of the sun. He earned pennies for his hard work which were snatched from him, from his greedy father. His father pushed him to the edge one day, and he just couldn’t take it so he ran, ran far away, further than his legs could carry him at the soul age of 19. He found shelter in the town Carolustadt. A family of canonists took his lost soul in, for years he had practiced they’re way of life, just trying to fit in, however, at the mature age of twenty two he was ready for a new adventure in his life.

Character Name: Michael Smith
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 23
Physical Description: Michael has bright gray eyes, though lately, they seemed to be clouded. His blonde hair rises an inch above his head. Average Height, Fair skin.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

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"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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MamaBearJade

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Greetings, your application has been placed on pending. You will have 24 hours to complete the following changes

 

Your metagaming definition is incorrect. Please read our wiki on metagaming to understand it.

Your powergaming definition is only half right. Please read our wiki on powergaming to get the rest of it.

Please expand on your biography and include server lore. You can find lore within our Wiki pages and scan the forums for current cities.

Character description is meant for you to describe your character’s appearance. Please place here.

Your interesting facts hold some powergaming. Please adjust and give us at least one fault.

 

You will find our New Player Discord will have valuable resources and members to help you. You are welcome to PM me with any questions comments or concerns you may have. Please notify me when you are finished with your changes

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MamaBearJade

 

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Greetings, your application has been placed on pending. You will have 24 hours to complete the following changes

 

Please include server lore. You can find lore within our Wiki pages and scan the forums for current cities.

Your bio contains IRL items and no server lore.

Your interesting facts still need at least one fault.

 

You will find our New Player Discord will have valuable resources and members to help you. You are welcome to PM me with any questions comments or concerns you may have. Please notify me when you are finished with your changes

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MamaBearJade

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Greetings, your application has been placed on pending. You will have 24 hours to complete the following changes

 

Fault cannot be “long ranged weapons”. Please give a fault. This usually means they have to slowly get over. You can use this link to help you.

I would suggest changing the dagger line in your facts, as it is a bit powergaming.

 

You will find our New Player Discord will have valuable resources and members to help you. You are welcome to PM me with any questions comments or concerns you may have. Please notify me when you are finished with your changes

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