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TheFragileBlade

By TheFragileBlade

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: using outside sources in rp example: a friend told me that my house was burning and you burned it
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: using someone else to do something example *jerry kills tom*
    Status: Accepted
Character Name: Sammy
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 35
Physical Description: tall and muscular brown eyes
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MyLittleUnicorn

Changed Status to Under Review

Your application has been placed on:

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♥ Your definition of powergaming is a bit off, and I'd like you to add examples of each case.

♥ Your biography is good but lacks the required AT LEAST ONE server lore reference. It can be a place name, religion or old happened event name.

♥ Character description is only supposed to tell us what your character looks like. Eye color, hair color, height and so on!

♥ Interesting facts: I wouldn't include being a former general as those are roles that usually take a lot of time and effort to gain on roleplay.

♥ Interesting facts: secretly wishes to be happy - i wouldn't include this for the needed one weakness, and I would honestly remove it totally even. It doesn't really go for interesting facts.

 

You have 24 hours to make the asked changes!

 

Server lore and definitions you can easily read from the Wiki ! Remember to write everything by your own words! So no copy pasting answers!

I also recommend you to join up in The New Player Discord !

 

You may also contact me at all times here on the forums, via discord: Ali#0878 or in-game (MyLittleUnicorn) , if you are in need of assistance or if you have any questions.

 
Good luck!

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MyLittleUnicorn

Your application has been placed on:

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♥ Biography: I would fix off the leading forces. Renatus has it's own military and history, and It's not allowed that as you start up, you would have hold such position in the military. I'd change it up to a solider role if something.

♥ You must add at least one weakness to interesting facts.

 

You have 24 hours to make the asked changes!

 

 

You may contact me at all times here on the forums, via discord: Ali#0878 or in-game (MyLittleUnicorn) , if you are in need of assistance or if you have any questions.

 
Good luck!

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MyLittleUnicorn

 

Your application has been placed on:

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♥ You must add at least one weakness to interesting facts: Being afraid of dragon is same for quite many and it can't really be taken as a weakness of a character. Please try to come up with a real weakness, either was it something he can't do or is bad at, personality issue or so on!

 

You have 24 hours to make the asked changes!

 

 

You may contact me at all times here on the forums, via discord: Ali#0878 or in-game (MyLittleUnicorn) , if you are in need of assistance or if you have any questions.

 
Good luck!

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MyLittleUnicorn

Your application has been:

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Thank you for applying and being fast with the changes!
You will be implemented into the server shortly!

 

While so, you can take a look of some more server lore if you want, from the Wiki !

 

Also, feel free to directly contact me at all times here on the forums, via discord: Ali#0878 or in-game. My username is MyLittleUnicorn, either was it that you need assistance on something, or if you need help on getting started on the server!

 
You can also in-game use the command ' /atreq (message here) ' to get aid from the Application team! We are more than willing to help you with anything!

 

♥ Good luck and enjoy the journey around Lord Of The Craft! ♥ 

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