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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: describes a player's use of real-life knowledge
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Player 1 strikes player 2 acrose the chest killing him in standly, you cant do that becouse you take controll of the other person character and don't give him a chance to react
    Status: Accepted

 

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Eldrin grow up in fenn he was the son of Aegnorl of the Snowland Realm of  Talar’ikur. One year later, his father died but his mother disappaired. Legolas was on his own and he  learned many survive skills while  living out  in the wild. He became a skilled hunter. He was able to sustain him self in the harsh winters,  always roaming the woods, mastering the art of his mother’s bow. With his skills he started  exploring caves and hunting down monsters. He would  sell their  weapons and he once found a lonely  stag that was hurt so he brought him home he took care of him. He made a farm to feed the deer.  When he was full grown up, he moved with him to protect the humans from horrible creatures. He asked the humans if they wanted to join the adventure to battle  them. There was a night his sister (Phaerl) came to him from a long tour. She talked with Legolas about his parents and she saw her mother  across the road. Her mom just ran and screamed “I never want to see you again!”  Eldrin trained to battle the evilness to bring peace and happyness to the world. 

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Character Name: Eldrin
Character Race: SNOW_ELF
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 77
Physical Description: Blonde hair , Pale blue eyes
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

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"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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1yPM0YR.pngYou are almost there but you could use some help.

  1. The first thing is about your powergame definition it isnt actually correct so I would request you take a look and fix it. If you need help here is the wiki https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page
  2. your biography does have lore and it is nice, but I would request you please make it longer and create a story out of it of how your persona fits in.

(You have 24 hours to fix these few changes, until it is automatically denied, unless you are actively working on it.) If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw 

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