RhythmrhymE

Under Review.

Just now, TorkoalTom said:

Under Review.

Whats an under review?

Application Pending!

Please make sure the following changes are made:

-Your character age does not fit in with where you once lived, Aegis was seven years ago which means your character should not live right now. Your character should be either from Axios or Atlas. 

-Your definitions of powergaming is incorrect and your metagaming definition is too vague.

-Try and keep your character from one place, it is alright to state he travels but including multiple places can cause confusion and common errors.

-Try and make your biography flow like a story, remember to check your spelling and punctuation.

-Do not use underscores within your Interesting facts.

-Please include more details with your character description.

-Dragons are not commonly around upon the server, so it would not make sense to receive a scar from one. 

You have 24 hours to make the following changes, please message me upon the forums when they have been made or if you have any questions regarding the application process.

Changes still need to be made:

Your biography does not flow, you do not need to put '(Registered Mentor)' when you mention looking for a mage mentor. Your biography should flow like this: "Grace is a rather lonesome girl whom finds befriending people quite the challenge, her birth place of Linandria did not help her case of finding lasting friendships due to her rather odd behavior. Though through her unique attributes, she found her time being well spent on studying literature" This is an example of how your biography should flow.

-Your metagaming definition is still incorrect.

Your time of 24 hours still remains.

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Application Accepted.

User was successfully implemented!