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Raven Drakenhof

By Raven Drakenhof

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: when you know something that your character doesnt know to that point or call help from a player even when she/he isnt there
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Powergaming is when you force a rp in the way you want it to go, for example: Dodges attack and stabs you to death
    Status: Accepted

Iculro Drinriesh was born in a village near the elven clan called Warhawkes , when he became 10 years old he had to get flowers and plants , but he still doesn't know why he had to get the flowers and the plants .

When he got everything his parents told him to get he came back to his village , on the way he got scared by two older dark elfs wearing masks , the suprise attack scared him so much that he became unconscious and fell to the ground . 

When he woke up in his house the people of the village didn't take him serious anymore and the boy started to hurt him for fun , because they thought that he can't do anything against them and he never tried to hurt them , he just came back to his house with blood on his clothes and sometimes a blue eye or worse.

At the age of twenty four he and his parents had to leave the village because of bandits, after three days they came to a village near the elven town of Ker'nor and there he met a dark elf called Emac , he wasn't like the others in his old village , he was nice to him and helped him even when he was in trouble he saved him .

After twenty years he left the village to see the world and to go back to his old home , on the way to his old village he got into trouble with bandits , they took him everything he had , he tried to attack one of them , but the bandit just took his sword and provided him with slits and when he was done he just left him on the ground to die.

After two hours a traveler found him there and brought him to a village close to the attack , he and the villagers helped him as good as they could .

Three weeks later he woke up , when he got up and walked out of the room he looked for water and saw his face in the water reflection .

He took his clothes and asked the villagers who brought him to the village , they said it was a traveler with a mask .

Iculro Touched his face and looked at the villagers and asked them if they have a wooden mask , they looked confused at him and told him that they had an old mask with red paint on it.

He asked if he could have the mask , the villagers gave him the mask and when Raven got the mask he slowly left the village and wanted to forget the day, he tried every day until today , but he just couldn't.

From that day he could never be scared , even when he would try , anger was stronger then fear.

Character Name: Iculro Drinriesh
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 56
Physical Description: He is wearing brown pants , leather boots , a black jupon , a red gugel with hood and a wooden mask.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Thanks for applying to Lord of the Craft! After careful review of your application, there are a few things I've come across that need to be fixed in order to accept you. Do not fear, you aren't being denied, you just need to make the changes and you are good to go. Below, you will find the necessary edits that must be made:

  • Your powergaming definition is a little lackluster. If you can expand on it a bit for me I'd greatly appreciate it.
  • Your character description isn't how people would react to him, but rather it should be about what they would see when looking upon him. For examples, descriptions of clothing, how his body appears physically, that sort of thing.
  • The name isn't a bad one, but it's not the most culturally fitting for elves. You don't have to change it, but it'll make you feel a little out of place, I believe. If you want any suggestions, lemme know. 
  • Your interesting facts section requires one fault in it. None of those really can be considered a fault. Add one fault for the character.

You have 24 hours to make the necessary changes to the application before it will be denied. If you require any help during this time, please feel free to message myself or another member of the Application Team. Below, you will find some links that will help you in fixing up the application a bit.

 

Dark Elf Wiki Page: https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Dark_Elves

 

LotC New Player Discord: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

 

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Welcome to Lord of the Craft!

 

After reviewing the edits you made to your application, you have been accepted! During your stay with us on LotC, please feel free to reach out to myself at any point if you require assistance, or any other member of the Application Team. On top of that, the Game Moderation Team are an excellent source of assistance while you remain with us. It has been a pleasure reviewing your application, friend. Don't be afraid to use those sources I linked above at anytime while on LotC, as our wiki and various Discords go a long way at helping create lasting friendships and immersion on the server. You will be whitelisted and able to play shortly, have fun!

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