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yourmother

By yourmother

    • Rules: No
    Referral: Other
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: is knowing something by an outside information(example:my friend was going around with me in an adventure,then a unknown monster came in,and our village only known one thing about him,is that he can only die by a hit in one of his arms,but we dont know an
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: its like been op(overpowerded),example:forcing an action that the playing im RP with didnt want,or bieng like a god or so,able to one hit kill(just an example) my power level need to be limited.
    Status: Accepted
Character Name: Saya Minatsuki
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 19
Physical Description: A Man that Look Like A Girl With a Long Hair,and a Mask on His Head so No One Know that He is a Man Because of his face,Meduim Bodly Shape
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chaosgamer_

Changed Status to Under Review


 

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As you can can see, you are almost done! I just need you to change a few things

 

1 your story does not have any referrals to lore. Nation names, events or cities count as lore. The village names in your application are no real places that exist within the game and so they do not count.


 

If you need any more assistance you can contact me on the forums, through discord or in-game! My discord is (chaos#7283) and if you find me on the server, you can simply do /msg chaosgamer_. I strongly suggest joining the new player discord as well in case you need assistance or advice from other players or staff members → https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

I also recommend you looking over the wiki so you can find good lore to include in your application ?

 

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yourmother

to note Terriko Village is in the game,and i readed evrything about it,

to know i dont really know why did you tell me that,plus all of that as the wiki dont say what time did terriko accident happend,i cant say that the character is born in new terriko,another thing aeriel is the biggest city in Aegis,and i already noted,that terriko village is on Aegis realm,i tryed to put it there

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Just now, SayaMinatsuki said:

to note Terriko Village is in the game,and i readed evrything about it,

to know i dont really know why did you tell me that,plus all of that as the wiki dont say what time did terriko accident happend,i cant say that the character is born in new terriko,another thing aeriel is the biggest city in Aegis,and i already noted,that terriko village is on Aegis realm,i tryed to put it there

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26 minutes ago, chaosgamer said:

Changed Status to Pending

 

26 minutes ago, chaosgamer said:

Changed Status to Pending

 

again if you readed the story before,you may understand that what happend wasnt on the village,out of it that mean its could be in the forest example,the victim were only me and my sister,as you may know,im not trying to say you didnt read it,or didnt look up the cities and villages i write in the story,but to know,i got decnied last 2 days,so i came back after reading the wiki

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☾ ⇒ Your bio requires lore from the server. I suggest looking over the forums and wiki for places, events, noteable figures.
☾ ⇒ Your story is very difficult to follow. I am unsure if english is a second language, but the story makes very little sense. Perhaps take some time proof reading and rewriting the story

☾ ⇒ Your interesting facts do not really hold any weakness. I suggest finding something that your character needs to overcome, such as a handicap such as a fear, disability, or injury

 

You will find our New Player Discord will have valuable resources and members to help you. You are welcome to PM me with any questions comments or concerns you may have. Please notify me when you are finished with your changes

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