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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-mp.com
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metagaming is the use of information that is acquired through means that did not include the use of roleplay to get.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Forcibly continuing your character though the illness of others. i.e. killing someone without waiting for them to react in any way (Even if you roleplayed it out).
    Status: Accepted

Odra' Viin

(Homeland - Sutica        Deity - Metztli)

Was born into a family/unofficial tribe which called themselves the Ahm-Khara [Ah-hum Car-ruh] (Whom are an unrecognized and unofficial tribe that betrayed and renounced their species' main tribe)- a self sufficient family/unofficial tribe that prided themselves on a 'Pure, strong, and traditionalist lineage'- to which Odra' Viin only had his blood in common with his family. He wanted at an early age to explore more than the meager settlement they had purchased and claimed as their own. After a line of unfortunate circumstances, Odra' Viin was abandoned by his family- although he was still a kit. After being left on his own to die, he learned to harness the elements for self-gain and survivability. He is anything but special- in fact he is known by those who have met him as a sort of reclusive sage with a short temper, quick to retort when told conflicting data. Despite his 'know-it-all' behavior, he seems to have the best interests of others at heart. In a few statements; He is rough, but kindly; He is easily angered, however vastly intelligent; He is especially apathetic, however... well... he has his moments.

Character Name: Odra' Viin
Character Race: KHARAJYR
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 28
Physical Description: Odra' Viin is a slender cat-like male- with an upright composure. He is of a night-black color with a slightly narrow face. His eyes burn a fiery red.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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MickMeist

 

Your application has been placed on…

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It seems you misunderstand what Kharajyr are in our context, this link will explain their culture, physique, and etc. https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Kha

You also do not have a specific reference to our lore in your bio, which is a requirement.

 

 

If any of the reasons I stated involve the wiki, this link will take you right to the home page, where you can find quick links to the metagaming and power emoting definitions, as well as look around to browse our server lore! WIKI

 

Being placed on Pending means that your application was solid, though there are still some issues present that need a bit of tweaking. You’ve got 24 hours to make them using the [Edit] feature of the forum. Whenever you make any changes, contact me and I will review the application once more. After 24 hours your app will either be Accepted or Denied

This discord link:https://discord.gg/eySYjqw is the link to our New Player Discord, feel free to join and ask any questions you’d like, as well use it as a tool once you are accepted!

 

If you’ve got any questions at all, feel free to message me on the forums, at my Discord, MickMeist#0001, or on the server with the /msg MickMeist command, or the /atreq command will allow you to place a ticket for assistance with myself of one of my colleagues!


 

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TanisTheMute

I wish you could have been more specific in what you originally thought was wrong, but I believe I understand where my fault was. I associated them with more of a Skyrim 'Khajit' sort of feeling, however should have read the wiki in more depth. Fixing now.

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Your application has been:

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On behalf of the Application Team, and LoTC as a whole, I’d like to welcome you to our community!

You will be implemented shortly, during this brief wait I implore you to visit our WIKI and continue reading up on server lore.

 

This discord link:https://discord.gg/eySYjqw is the link to our New Player Discord, feel free to join and ask any questions you’d like, as well use it as a tool once you are accepted!

 

If you’ve got any questions at all, feel free to message me on the forums, at my Discord, MickMeist#0001, or on the server with the /msg MickMeist command, or the /atreq command will allow you to place a ticket for assistance with myself of one of my colleagues!

 

Can’t wait to see you roleplaying!

 

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