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Shadow_wolf124
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shadow was born in the year 2001 at the place called Norland she was also a had a bit darker skin because of her race. Because she is a human her ageing is is at a slower pace the longest she can last is up to 150 at the most. she doesn't have any cures at she knows at the time she is 6'5 of height. She now a highlander she lives in a small camp and hunts and fish for food she stays away from the kingdoms from how much war they are in sometimes. she has dark black hair with dark brown eyes.  She is clam and quite in situations that are bad or with drama. She is has a small knife to hunt anmials and to protect her self from anyone who tires to attack her with out notice.  

 


Character Name: Shadow
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Her black smooth hair. She has dark brown eyes. She has a small knife with her all times.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

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"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Under Review.

Your application has been...

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-Congratulations on the acceptance of your application, if you need any help from me please feel free to message me on the forums, on discord BritBritt#1506 (the second brit has a second t), or in game /msg Cosmetology.

 

-If you need further help feel free to use OOC chat, /h to access our help chat, or for more pressing issues use /modreq to get in touch with a GM.

 

-Happy Roleplaying and I hope to see you playing soon. 

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1 hour ago, BritBritt said:

Under Review.

Your application has been placed on....

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-Please refine your power gaming and metagaming definitions to use examples and explain how they affect roleplay.

 

-Please expand on your character's biography to include one piece of server lore.

 

-Please refine your character's biography to dis-include magic. Your character may not learn magic until you find a teacher with in the game itself. She may aspire to learn magic but cannot have any magic or prior knowledge in magic. Please refer to the rules here:

"Your character can't be royal/noble/child of a famous person, an important character, come from lands other than those in the server lore or have any form of magical qualities. If you wish to learn magic after being accepted, you may find a teacher in game."

 

-Please refine your character's three interesting facts to reflect your character's strengths and weaknesses. 

 

-If you need any help with these changes feel free to message me here on the forums, make a comment on this post, or message me on discord BritBritt#1506 (the second brit has a second t). You have 24 hours to make these changes. 

  I have finshed  the changes that you told me to fix if there is something i have done wrong please tell me -Shadow

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Hi Shadow,

 

-Thanks for making your edits. Unfortunately while you have lore approved regions your lore approved regions are outdated. We are currently on the map of Atlas. Your character would have lived on Axios and Atlas for her age. Which also needs to be 18 years of age. Please use updated lore. 

 

-Your meta gaming definition is a good example but not the only way to metagame. Please expand upon this just so that I have the ability to know you have a clear understanding on what metagaming is and how it affects roleplay.

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