Jump to content

somethingdumb222


somethingdumb222
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other website
    Discord: somethingdumb
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: I will avoid powergaming by becoming fully immersed in the story while simultaneously respecting the other players' roleplay. I will use "attempt" to prevent making emotes that don't allow for player interaction.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metagaming disrupts fair roleplay by using knowledge a character should not have to influence in-character decisions, giving a player an unfair advantage. This type of playing breaks immersion and undermines the collaborative storytelling experience for everyone involved.
    Status: Pending

Character Name: Ril Bunev
Character Race: Heartlander
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: A roughly 5'11", 160lb man with satin straight brown hair and piercing emerald eyes. He wears seemingly unremarkable, regular peasant clothes. Average
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))

 

Ril Bunev blinks, uncertain, his boots squelching on the damp ground as he shifts his weight. The hag's eyes seem to pierce deeper than they should—like she's already rifled through the corners of his soul and revealed his true self, bare.

He hesitates, then awkwardly lowers himself onto the cushion. His average frame folds into a cross-legged position with a moderate lack of grace.

He glances at the dancing candlelight, then at her again. Her eyes haven't left him. He is cautious, but those eyes, he knows that he must answer with something, so, taking in the wet air, he cautiously says,

"...You say you've been expecting me. That makes one of us."

He offers a tired smile—more out of habit than charm.

"My name's Ril. Ril Bunev. I'm no one of note. I come from a no-name town in some no-name part of the world, born only to a mother who worked too hard, with no father worth remembering. I wasn't born with the blood of kings or the mark of prophecy. No gods ever whispered my name. I'm just a man."

He leans forward a little, resting his forearms on his knees.

"But I read the old stories. The ones where farmhands slay tyrants, or a forgotten son lifts a kingdom. I know I don't have their skill... but... every night I dream..."

Ril trails off, staring at the candles, watching the flame flicker back and forth. He shrugs slightly, letting out a soft yet audible sigh, as his voice softens.

"I know it's silly, but can you blame me? To matter, to truly make a difference in someone's life. My whole life I've been average. I wasn't good enough with a sword to be a knight, and we had no money to get a proper tutor for anything. I only managed to scrape by and learn to read and write from my mom. So... I left. I wanted to see the world. Learn its rules. Maybe find something I've missed. Maybe make a difference—somewhere. Even if it's small."

He pauses.

"That's the story so far. The rest… well, maybe that's why I'm here."

He studies her face, cautious but curious.

"So, if you really were expecting me—why? What do you know about my story?"

 
Screenshot of Skin:



User Feedback

Recommended Comments

 

AD_4nXc2ukqlmVvk4JD27b7M2Uih-aVkcAV7mdDOqox39NUqIyxkf3JXwosMk3kBI7l7ztyVoaTtF58Zji_e3DXA9wI3993jNltEtPtklGxYq6SgZfHFZPvQY_ue5xYZrLbjVp3kRaKWSg?key=usGp28myhjXLepV_RYNgtdXn

Hi there! Your application has been put on pending as there are changes that need to be made before you can be accepted. See below. 

  • Your backstory is AI-written, please refrain from using such tools for writing your application.
 

If you do not make these changes within 48 hours,  you will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord @cheese1sgrater to let me know, or if you don’t have Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

You can join the LotC Discord here: Discord

If you still need help, check the wiki! WIKI

Link to the New Player hub! : New Player Hub

 

Link to comment
Share on other sites



Guest
This is now closed for further comments

  • Recently Browsing   0 members

    No registered users viewing this page.

×
×
  • Create New...