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By Lord_of_Speed

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server-list.com
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metagaming is using real life sources to keep track of in game situations.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Power gaming is when you take a certain skill set and use it to unrealisticly overpower another player.
    Status: Accepted

Bjørn lives in a small town on the outskirts of the Kingdom of Haense. The Great Northern War had just ended last year, and people we’re finally calming down. People were trusting one another again and working to rebuild. Unlike his Highland brothers and sisters, Bjørn had always been a secluded person. He had very few friends and spent most of his time in the forest. He is turning 18 today and his mother and others friends an family thought that he should work in the family business as a steel smith to celebrate milestone and his father. Instead, he goes off on his own and starts hunting. After the murder of his father, he found letters for Gunnar, his father. They were letters about being warned that he shouldnt have dug for info, that he should have just stayed with his family while dtill could. After Bjørn read this, he was angry, he didn’t know exactly why his dad was killed, but it was unjust and he vowed that he would find whoever killed his father. After that day, Bjørn had been honing his strengths, freerunning, archery, challenging the guards to duels. He takes up hunting, which allows him to become very stealthy and quick with his bow. He starts taking bounties, men that have been patronizing the people around him. Now that the day has come for him to leave his mom, he leaves and travels searching for any weapons or artifacts that will help him on his quest to assassinate his father’s murderer.

Character Name: Bjørn
Character Race: Highlander
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Black hair, scar across right eye, brown eyes, holds a hunters bow and sword, has a dagger on a belt, wears a hood without sleeves, and has scars arms
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

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"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Cornivore

Changed Status to Under Review

1yPM0YR.png You are almost there, but you can use some help.

  1. The first thing is your meta game definition and your power game definition they are both wrong and need some improvement. If you need some help here is the wiki https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page
  2. The next thing is your biography, to me I feel like you could add a lot more descriptive pieces into it and make it longer, add some more lore into it as well, make a good story out of it. If you need help you can use the wiki https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page or the fourms.
  3. The third thing is your interesting facts, I would request you make them a little longer and make them into sentences please.
  4. The fourth thing is please find a different skin that is lore friendly towards the server, if you need help to find what one looks like or need one you can use the skin forum for help. https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/161821-the-lotc-skin-archive/

(You have 24 hours to fix these few changes, until it is automatically denied, unless you are actively working on it.) If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4

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