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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metagaming is when a character knows information that they otherwise should not have known, such as another character's name or age before meeting them.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Powergaming can be best described at trying to bend the entire rp directly to your charcter's best options, rather than roleplaying with their own set of skills. Say your character would have no idea how to shoot a bow, and yet the get a clean shot, or be
    Status: Accepted

Oland was born in the city of Cyrilsburg. His mother was one of the farfolk, father a heartlander. Growing up, Oland spent most of his time helping his father tend to the fields. The massive stretches of potatoes and wheat were where he spent most of his days. His only expectation in life was to become like his father and work the fields, and that was what he planned to do. He never expected anything different, aside from the occasional traveler he rarely met any races besides humans. 

 

His mother and father, having now passed on due to sickness seem to have provided him with a new task.; taking up the job his father once had and tending to the fields. But perhaps curiosity would get the better of him.


Character Name: Oland Tess
Character Race: Heartlander
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 23
Physical Description: His complexion is one of a man who has known hard work. His gaze is gentle, but his face is smudged with dirt and his hair is unkempt.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Changed Status to Under Review

1yPM0YR.png You are almost there, but you can use a little bit of help.

  1. Your powergame definition is slightly off, and I would request you look over it and fix it. If you need help here is the wiki https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page
  2. Also your skin looks a little too modern I would request you find a new one that can be better for the lore. If you need help here is an old skin thread https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/161821-the-lotc-skin-archive/

(You have 24 hours to fix these few changes, until it is automatically denied, unless you are actively working on it.) If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4

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