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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: ThatVeks#7665
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Using OOC knowledge and incorporating it into roleplay
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Using overpowered means to gain leverage within roleplay
    Status: Accepted

Haldun was the bastard son of a Hanseti Chieftain that lived a fortnight by horse away, unknowingly, he’d wonder whom his father was since his youth. Working odd jobs to support a comfortable, decent life with his mother within Ayr, he’d have his hand as a smithy’s help at a young age, but became more of a hunter and guard later on his life. With the plentiful experience at his behest, he’d go out and explore the wonders the world had to offer. Naive he was, and what had preceded him he couldn’t imagine what a gander it was that he’d experience throughout the life near his village. Famine, drought, plague, and greed, he thanked his mother for protecting his perspective of the world until now, when his mother finally unveils who his real father is.


Character Name: Haldun
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: A jaw like an anvil, square face, big nose, neck like a tree trunk, mesomorph, brown-blackish hair, green eyes and pale skin.
Height: 6'4"
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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  • Your Backstory needs two (2) references to Lord of the Craft-specific lore. You can find some examples of LotC lore on our wiki, here: https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/
  • The Maximum Height for a human is 6’4”, while yours is 6’5”. This is minor, but I’d greatly appreciate if you could scale down just one inch so it’s within the acceptable range.
  • Your Interesting Facts must include at least one flaw or weakness in your character – this can be physical flaws, like blindness, or poor traits, like quick to anger or paranoia.

Your application was generally within acceptable standards, though the issues above need to be edited. You have 24 hours to make said changes – please message me on discord at edelos#5883 once they have been made.

 

The server Wikipedia has a huge amount of relevant and important lore information on the current state of the server. Additionally, you can join our New Player Discord to ask questions to our helpful Community Staff and to meet other server players, including other new players and Nation Leaders or guides.

 

For future assistance, definitely feel free to contact me through discord at edelos#5883, or by using the command /msg edelos ingame. You can also use the command /creq whilst on the server to open a Community Staff ticket!

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Welcome to LotC! Upon your application being set to accepted you should be automatically whitelisted on the server. If there are any issues, definitely feel free to reach out to me and let me know!

 

If you’d like assistance in-game, or guidance of any kind, feel free to reach out to me or any other Community Team member, and ask for a Wilven Monk – the unbiased healers of the Wilven Sanctuary and Cloud Temple – or otherwise ask for assistance from us in general!

 

Do note that for future reference, while it was a minor mistake, Hanseti nobles are called Lords.

 

You’re encouraged to join the LotC New Player Discord (linked in the above post) to meet new players and charter and nation leadership, and to ask Community Team members any questions you might have. You’re also encouraged to read our New Player Guide, which provides in-depth information about LotC and roleplay itself. If you need help with anything and at any point in the future, feel free to reach out to me personally at edelos#5883 on discord, or to issue a /creq whilst ingame to open a Community Staff ticket.

 

Thanks for applying, and I hope to see you around Arcas!

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