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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Using outside information to benefit your character
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Making your character do something out of their power *Maengol stabs you, killing you*
    Status: Accepted
Character Name: Maengol
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Maengol is a Dark Elf, standing straight at a height of 6'4. He is muscular, and wears clothes reminiscent of a commoner with an estoc to his hip.
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Riftblade

Pending - 

 

Your application has been placed under pending for the following reasons:

- Was there a reason why your persona was trained in combat when they were young? If so, explain why

- Why does your persona view practitioners of magic as evil? You say it is because of his education, but what is the link between that and magic?

- Perhaps explain what weapons your persona was trained the most with, as you state they were skilled with an estoc

- Add more detail in general if you can, it helps build a solid background for you persona

 

You'll have 24 hours to make the needed edits. If you have questions or need extra time, don't hesitate to message me and I'll be happy to help out.

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Riftblade

Accepted!

 

Welcome to LoTC, you'll be whitelisted soon enough! Until then, check out more of the lore which can be found on the forums or the wiki and see what builds there are on the server as a Wandering Soul. If you have questions, don't hesitate to contact me and I'll be happy to answer. Here's the link to the new player discord as well:https://discord.gg/jXC5SX7.

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