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TenshiPrime
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    Discord: TenshiPrime #9429
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Learning out of character information like reading a DM's Notes.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Powergaming is when you are super sayian 4 strong at the start of dragon ball. Its just not fun.
    Status: Accepted

Raised by her grandmother and father in Curon, Marion had a simple childhood. Her grandmother Leene would teach her how to sew and raised her in the teachings Canonism as best she could. Her father, Glenn, would spent most of his time in the wilderness, hunting with his beloved courser, Shadow. Her mother died in childbirth, but she's told that she is the spitting image of her. She had only one thing to know her by, her mother's prize horse, Shortcake. The white Rouncey spent most of its time in the stable or out at pasture, but it was once a fine race horse that would destroy competitions. As she grew older, she became its caretaker, braiding its mane, learning how to ride, how to show off. She took to riding like a fish in water. On the day of her first competition, she came in last place. Shortcake was well over 30 years old at this point, no matter how hard she trained, she was never going to be the show stopper she was in her youth. When she died, not long after Marion's 19th birthday, there was a great morning in the house of Dragmire. Her mother's horse, the one she had spent half her life trying to improve, was now gone. Marion mourned for the horse she loved, for the mother she felt so close with despite never having met. She spent the next few years in a haze, simply passing the days away.  A few years later, Glenn was attacked by bandits, he lost Shadow and permanently destroyed part of his back. Marion realized she needed to get her act together to support her family.  She set out into Arcas, to find a horse that would bring honor back to her family name. 


Character Name: Marion Dragmire
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 22
Physical Description: An athletic, fair skinned lady with waist length red hair and grey eyes. Wears a blue dress with a white apron, with white trousers and leather boots.
Roleplay Scenario:

She hesitates for a moment, startled by the man’s forwardness. “Oh, I’m just passing though, looking for work. Gotta feed my family somehow.” she smiles. 

 

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You will have 24 hours to make the following changes to your application. Please message me here on the forums, or through my discord (TwistedFries#1055) once you have made the changes, and I’ll take another look at your application.

 

  • I recommend re-reading the definition of Meta-gaming, your definition appears to be somewhat vague. A good way to prove that you know the definition would be through using examples.
  • Your Character Biography has an awesome storyline, however, I’m afraid to inform you that you are missing one more mandatory lore piece; they could be based on religions, more locations, and so forth. Here’s the LotC Wiki for more lore information!
  • Your Character Biography explains how ‘Glenn’ used a Pegasus’s wing as an engagement ring- Sadly a Pegasus is seen as a mystical creature and therefore not allowed within the application. Any form of magic, magical knowledge, et Cetera is not allowed.

    You can also join our New Player Discord- Where you can ask questions to our Community Team and meet other server players. You can contact me here on the forums, or through my discord (TwistedFries#1055) for any questions or concerns.
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Welcome to LotC! Upon setting your application to accepted you should be automatically white-listed on the server. Should there be issues with your white-listing, please contact me through the forums or discord (TwistedFries#1055)

 

You are encouraged to join our New Player Discord to meet current players and to ask our Community Team Members any questions you might have. You are also encouraged to read out the New Player Guide, which provides detailed information about LotC roleplay itself. Should you need help at any point in the future, remember to contact me through my forums account or discord. You can issue /creq on the server to open a Community Staff Ticket.

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