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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: A strategy or a action that is used in a game witch uses external factors to affect a game
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: The style of games to get to a specific goal
    Status: Accepted

Ghazat is sometimes seen training by himself, when he was about 6 or 7 a war broke out be orcs and humans then he took off running and ended up in a forest where he was well raised by an hiker that was wondering off. The hiker learned about what happened to him and told about the Glorkil lore he learned. He decided we wasn't going to be scared he asked the hiker to teach him to be an archer after a few weeks he got the hang of it. Then his goal was to find and kill the person who ended his normal childhood. When he was younger he was very intelligent and brave he is even planning to one day be in the Glorkil Clan. He may look weak but in the inside he can be very strong.


Character Name: Ghazat
Character Race: Orc
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Ghazat Wears a green shirt, and has red eyes. He weighs 100 pounds, he is 6 ft tall, he is fat. He is intelligent, and a very good Archer.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Hello! Thank you for applying to Lord of the Craft! After reviewing your application, it has been placed onto pending. Do not fear, you've not been denied, however you also have not been accepted: yet! Below I will list some necessary changes to your application in order to be accepted. You will have up to 24 hours to make the necessary changes or the application will be denied. 

  • Your definitions can use a bit of work. They are both almost there, but they can each be expanded on. Take another look at our rules or even google them, you'll find the definition with ease. Just ensure it is not plagiarized. 
  • The backstory is fine in terms of your use of lore and length. However, I would suggest fixing up the grammar and spelling a bit, makes it easier to review. Also, ensure your character is not a member of the Gorkil clan. Knowing about it is fine, as it's public lore you can read. However you cannot be a part of the clan without first speaking to one of their leaders.
  • The name Archer is acceptable, however it's not quite theme fitting. I would suggest changing it, but you won't be denied if you don't.
  • Your description should detail the physical appearance of your character. Things like height, weight, clothes they are wearing, distinctive features.

If you require any help throughout this process, don't be afraid to contact me directly. I am more than willing to aid you. With that in mind, below you will find some helpful Discord links. I would definitely suggest joining the LotC New Player Discord, considering it's full of experienced and determined players who want to aid beginners much like yourself.

 

LotC Public Discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4

 

LotC New Player Discord: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

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Welcome to Lord of the Craft! After reviewing the application and the edits made to it, you've been accepted! Within the next few minutes your application shall be implemented and you'll be able to join in on the roleplay! I reiterate that it be a great idea to join the various Discords I linked above, as they go a long way in helping new players carve out a piece for themselves on the server. If you require anything else, please feel free to send me a message and I'll get back to you ASAP! One last thing before you begin! Orcs tend to range in the 200+ pounds area, for weight. Other than that, welcome to our corner of the world!

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