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TheOnyxDragon
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-mp.com
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metagaming is when you use information that your character in a role playing game wouldn't have. You are using "meta" knowledge. It's essentially cheating.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Powergaming is when you build your character to be best in a specific section, typically-but not always-in combat.
    Status: Pending

 

Luna was born in Ker'nor, Axios (where she still lives today) to a husband and wife of an arranged marriage, it was clear that her parents did not love each other. She is the youngest of her family. seeing that her mother was 496 years old when she gave birth. Due to the Curse of the Elves female and male Elves can't have any children after the age of 500 and they have to wait 10-15 years in between each child. She has two brothers named Kule and Kana, although Kana died in battle. Though her parents kept her as close to them as any Dark Elven family would, although she wasn't very close. Ever since Luna turned 13 she longed for adventure, but she was still a child and wasn't allowed to fulfill her dreams. She knew that you had to be at least 50 to be considered an adult in the Elven customs. That's why she mainly kept these dreams to herself. She did not want to be labeled as a dreamer. At the age of 17, she found a book outside her families dwelling, picking it up, she opened it and began to read. Most of the book was in Elven, though many of the word had been long forgotten and banned by her people, alas her grandparents taught her some of this Elven before, they were two of the few elves who could understand the abandoned language. Luna never knew why or how her grandparents knew the illegal speech, nor did she dwell on the thought. Taking a few hours to decode the book, she realized it was a history book, dated back to her grandparents time. She learned that very few Dark Elves lived in Aegis, and not much else was said about it. "A small amount dark elves lived in Aegis. The few that did were part of Malinor’s military group,  called The Wardens. Other than that, not much happened in this time period" The book said. Luna being a curious child asked her grandparents about the topic. They revealed that they were from Aegis, they told stories of what the land was like, and how they lived. Knowing this information made Luna want to know more about Aegis, it made her want to explore it. She day-dreamed about it and thought about it while she was asleep. She vowed to herself that she would one day explore the land of Atlas. She is now 18, ready to fulfill that vow. (And more as I roleplay)

 

Just some fun facts:

 

Luna is an excellent healer, due to her extraordinary hearing, she was once able to hear the school children being taught medicine. I sounded interesting to her and she wanted to know more about the topic. After asking around an elderly man agreed to teach her and taught her all that he knew over the course of 3 years. Today, she is known as "The Doctor" of her family.

 

She isn't the most pleasant person to be around when you first meet her, she's never really had a friend before and she has trust issues, but she will warm up to you.

 

Luna is a complete bookworm. Reading, Drawing and learning geography are her favorite hobbies. She was often bored when she was 3 so parents gave her book after book to read, after a while, she became addicted, so much so that all her parents had to give her geography books. She looked at all the maps and drew then until she memorized them, then she started to draw her brother and other things until all she was doing every day was drawing and reading.

 

It was not surprising when Luna was called to a medical emergency, but an actual emergency? Involving her Brother? When Luna was 17 she was called by a woman who said that her brother was hanging off the railing of her families dwelling, and since her parents were not home, she was the only one who could get in and save him. (Why they couldn't just catch him? Idk.) The Wolff's were known to be strong, but Luna was the weakest of her family. Never the less, she ran up her families 3 story dwelling to find her brother about to fall. She gripped onto his ankle attempting to pull him up, when she got him to safety, she heard her shoulder pop. She attempted to heal herself but to no avail. The village healers told her that her right shoulder muscle had ripped, and she would not be able to use it. She then attempted to use her left shoulder for everything. 

 


Character Name: Luna Wolff
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: She has light blue-ish hair and red eyes. Jet-black skin. She likes to wear black, two-piece clothing (Shirt and shorts) along with boots.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Pending.

 

- Avoid using word for word information from the wiki as this can be seen as plagiarism, this information also isn't something that always will be known in roleplay.

- There isn't really ancient elven, there is normal elven however most of the words have been lost to the past. I'd advise to sticking to your more basic phrases, words,     and such.

-Why Linandria? Ker'nor may be a better location for a Dark Elf to be born.

- Explain more in depth as to why your persona is good at what they are good at.

- For interesting facts, explain more in detail how your persona injured their right shoulder and how they lost their ability to see in one eye.

- I recommend changing the part about having excellent hearing since it seems a bit much to learn skilled healing through simply eavesdropping 

- Add more detail and information if you can.

 

You will have 24 hours to make the needed edits. If you have questions. feel free to message me or contact me.

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