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    • Rules: Yes
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    Discord: thereallamaa#4469
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: In my opinion it's like you watch a streamer playing roleplay and use this information for your own. The simplest explanation would be that your character knows stuff that he/she couldn't really know.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: In my words it includes forcing somebody to something in a roleplay or playing "god" or something similar. You shouldn't play god/superninja/superwarrior or force somebody to agree with your thinking of this situation. Combat for example, you can't say "Kills him one shot" this wouldn't be a good roleplay situation. Try out "Tries to shoot arrows on him/her".
    Status: Accepted

Balin was born in the south-east region of the Kingdom of Urguan. While his father, Dwalin, teached him in smithing of various objects, from swords to axes, his uncle teached him in fighting. After some years, Glóin (his uncle), moved out to work again as a mercenary this time in an army from Utak Ireheart. Following he spent more time with his mother and looking after his sick brother that had leukemia. But after the birth of his sister "Aria" she died. His father got a deep addiction to alcohol and from then he had to care about his brother and sister. Firstly he stole food on markets and begged for money, but from his first big score he got himself a little forge where he could work legally. Following of a big fire at his hometown where his both sister and brother died in the flames Balin started to wander around the grand Kingdom and see the world.

Character Name: Balin
Character Race: Cave Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 55
Physical Description: Balin is a well built, at an average heigt, brown eyes and hair from light brown to orange. His clothing is a kind of similar to a blacksmith.
Roleplay Scenario:

Firstly Balin took some seconds to study the stranger's face, but then he answered quickly and with a big smile: "Hello, my name is Balin and I would say I am here to see the world. Adventure is a good word for it. How about you? What brought you here?". After a talk about where you can get the best food and where's something that it's worth to see it, they both went their way and Balin watched the city, people and enjoyed the feeling in a new town.

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

  • Your powergaming definition is not exactly what I'm looking for. If you need to read up on the server-used definition of this term, visit this page. Please use the information you find here to rewrite your current definition, using your own words.
     
  • Your biography is missing one additional lore reference. Below you can find various links to help you find additional lore for your biography.
    • Dwarves
    • The Grand Kingdom of Urguan
    • Almaris, the realm we are currently on
    • Arcas, the realm we were previously on
    • Be sure that your additional lore reference does not just refer to one of the above realms, but goes more in depth by referring an actual specific lore piece.
  • Your personality traits/quirks seems to have cut off! Make sure you fix this, so a negative trait to your character is included.
     
  • I would like you to expand upon your roleplay scenario a bit more. Please see the guidelines provided below so you have an idea of what is expected here.
    • Your scenario must have at least one piece dialogue from your character included, surrounded by quotes.
    • Your scenario must have at least one action included.
    • The actions in your scenario must be written in the third person.
    • Currently your scenario is all dialogue (but without the quotes). I would like you to change the above, so it is a fitting scenario/emote. If you have any questions, don't hesitate to contact me with the information you'll find below.
       
  • These guidelines must be applied to the following scenario:
    • You’ve just stepped off of the boat in the port of a massive and fortified city. Before you lies a sprawling bazaar, with numerous shops, stalls, and seated traders selling wares to folk of all walks of life. Just as you’re about to continue walking onwards, into the market, you’re approached by a well-dressed gentleman who looks upon you with a big smile. “Welcome!” He began. “What brings you to this lovely city? Adventure? Wealth? Or some grand aspirations to elevate your place in society?”
      How do you respond?

 

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message DelfShadowLeader! If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at qɹɐɯ#9406

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

  • You are still missing a second lore reference in your biography! Please add an additional one. You can visit the pages below for some information on lore relevant for your application.

 

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message DelfShadowLeader! If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at qɹɐɯ#9406

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

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Hi there, as you can see, you have been accepted onto the server! Well done on your application, you’re doing great! So now, I welcome you to the wonderful community of LotC!

To get started, I suggest doing; /creq Please can a CT monk come assist me starting out?

 

Here are some links you may find useful while starting out! :

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Settlement_Guides

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [qɹɐɯ#9406]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message DelfShadowLeader to find me in game. If I’m not around you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

You can also use /creq ingame and me or my fellow CT members can help you that way!

Lastly, For guides, tutorials, and how to request help from a CT member, please head to the New Player Hub found here: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/ 

Have a great time roleplaying, and I look forward to seeing you around in future!

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