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By Ema

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Meta gaming is contacting someone out of character asking for help
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: forcing another player into doing something , or taking control of another players actions
    Status: Accepted

Valena Valentine , grew up in dominion having the world at her feet , she was an only child , she had parents who adored her , a beautiful home , and all the happiness she could ever imagine , until one day at the age of nine her mother decided to travel to haense to fetch Valena a present for her birthday , a silver hair brush with roses embroidering the small perimeters  ,s replica of the one her grandmother had ., but she hasnt come back sense. Sense then Valena Adapted to a lifestyle with just her father trying to learn to defend herself and live basically on her own , her father , who has grown sadder and sadder as days come to due to tragedy and mysterious disappearance has become no help onto taking care of her. Valena grew introverted and started becomming lonely withh no one to express herself to . Valena learned how to push her feelings down deep inside of her instead of coping , which led her to a life of dishonesty and selfishness.

 

Though she may sound like the start of a villain , she is not. If she was given the chance to save the life of someone else , she would do so putting her life in danger instead of theirs. She shows great loyalty and kindness to those who she believes needs it the most , such as friends (though she doesnt have many) and other people in her race. 

Character Name: Valena Valentine
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 19
Physical Description: Stubborn , Vain , Clumsy , dramatic , a bit dishonest but loyal and caring deep down.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Cornivore

Changed Status to Under Review

1yPM0YR.png You are almost there but need a little bit of help.

 

  1. Your biography is lacking in the lore department, I would request you look back into adding a few more details and include some of the servers lore into it. If you need some help heres the wiki https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

(You have 24 hours to fix these few changes, until it is automatically denied, unless you are actively working on it.) If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4

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