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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: You know information that you're character doesn't know in the RP world and ueses it against somebody
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: The way you are interacting with someone and overpowering them in a way that is not possible.
    Status: Accepted

There was a little boy named Cycropolus, about 14 years of age at the time, dull crimson eyes, dirty snow hair and wears some custom made leather clothing that he and his father both made. they live in a peaceful village on the outskirts of atlas, far south-west of sutica. His father was a leather worker and worked hard all day for a little mina pay. Cycropolus' mother was a stay at home mom, always cooking and cleaning and taking care of Cycropolus and his little sister Vatas. Vatas was just like her mother but smaller, beautiful, kind and loving. Vatas always helped her mom where she could while Cycropolus went to work with his father to help him bring home a pay. When cycropolus and his father came home they would sit down to eat a wonderful delisious meal that mother and Vatas made just for them. Father talked about his day at work and mothet would talk about how much little Vatas has been helping her. After dinner they all went to their nice cozy beds for a peacful sleep and start tomorrow anew. Whe Cycropolus woke up, it wasnt to the normal sounds of the busy village but to terrorizing screams and the roars of fire. raiders had come to his village, human raiders from the looks.they were riding through the village on steeds, weilding swords and torches. Father rushed in and grabbed cycropolus and told him to follow as they both rushed away to hide. Father shoved him in a little room just under the floor boards of the house in hope he wont be found. Father then took his sword to go defend the village. Cycopolus was in the room alone. no mother. no little sister.he curled into a ball and tried not to make a noise as the screams, fire echoed loudly. After a long while after all the noises have gone he emerged from his hiding spot and looked to what was once he world of peace. He was unable to ever unsee what he saw, everything burned to ash, bloody bodies litter the ground around him and thats when he saw the one thing he never thought he would. His little sister, mother, and father slaughtered like wild animals. It was then when he saw a strange looking man walking through the ruins. Difficult to make out any sort of appearance through the ash in the air cycropolus grab his father's sword with an iron grib and walked towards the figure. The closer he got the more he could make out about the figure, he was dressed in hard leather armor and looked more like a warrior than who he came to find out who it was upon reaching him. It was his neighbor drenched in blood and smelled of death. He took cycropolus under his wing as his own to raise him, train him in the ways of a warrior and the ways of being a dark elf. But after seeing what cycropolus saw that day, it would haunt him for the rest of his life bringing nightmares in his sleep and rage to any battle he fights.


Character Name: Cycropolus
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 21
Physical Description: dull crimson eyes, dirty snow hair and wears some custom made leather clothing that he and his father both made
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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  1. the one thing I would request you fix is to make your interesting facts into sentences please, they are a little too short for my liking.

(You have 24 hours to fix these few changes, until it is automatically denied, unless you are actively working on it.) If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4

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 If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4

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