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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Is role-playing with the story line that is original to you and no one else, It might involve other people but it can only be your story because you need to be the one who created it and play it.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: In text form, making the role-playing more interesting by 1) Applying real life facts into the role-played situation ex: Instead of killing someone with 1 hit, I might need multiple hit because the person may have on armor.
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Manalosa grew up in the great nation of Druidic Order with her parent. Growing up, she was always exposed to magical identity such as magical herbs, potions, and totems. Her parent were 2 powerful high elf, her mom possessed extraordinary knowledge of healing and alchemy. And her father, once was a respected teacher of the Larihei whom gave up his job to move back home with his family. Since she grew up in the Druidic Order, Manalosa have a strong connection to nature, she always wanted to have the ability to communicate with nature through spiritualism. She also want to later learn about healing magic, and also shapeshifitng . And that was Manalosa dream at the age of 10. She always wanted to be involve in magic but her parent always mentioned to her that she need to first wield a different kind of weapon. So at the age of 29, Manalosa had a training experience with dagger. She didn't learned much, but she know enough to defends herself. At the age of 35, she dabble in some archery, but took notice that she wasn't very good at it. The girl couldn't even pick up the bow. Around that time, Manalosa's father died because of an mystery curse that was cast upon him 540 years ago. And the curse was passed on to the next generations, but then she realized that the curse will skip an generation. Meaning her children will eventually suffer among the curse. So she spent 20 years, searching for a cure with her mother.In those 20 years,she traveled to many different nations finding a cure but no luck they had. But just before those 20 years ended, Manalosa's mother forced her daughter to go to the great city of Okarn'thilln to do hers studies. Manalosa refused her mothers advice and started a big disagreement between them. To protect her daughter, Manalosa's mother cast an spell on her that replace her memory of her dad passing because of an curse, to her dad died in a fire while experiencing a new concoction. From this, Manalosa have forgotten all about her curse and those 20 years. Only remembering from the day her father died, Manalosa swear to become a respected druid just like her father. So, at the age of 55 , Manalosa is setting out on her own to make her way to the great city of Okarn'thilln in the great Silver State of Haelun'or. Her mission is to bathe in the golden pools and become an high elf just like her father once did.


Character Name: Manalosa
Character Race: High Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 55
Physical Description: A fair maiden with long golden locks, extremely piercing crystal blue eyes. She have a tall and lean figure. She wore a long white and gold gown.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Changed Status to Under Review

 

Thank you for applying for Lord of The Craft but unfortunately, your application has been put under...

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✦ Please do check the definition and see if you can change it. Possibly give us an example that will complement the definition you have right now as your examples aren't what we're currently looking out for right now. Consider contacting on me on discord if you need further explanation.

 

✦ Note that your character cannot be attuned through druidism since it takes both in character and in real
life time. You'll also have to wait at least two weeks before you can possess any "magic" such as Druidism, it would also mean that your character won't be able to talk with animals just yet.

 

✦ Elves culturally don't turn into adults before they hit 50 years old. So it would be very unlikely that she'd already venture out to the high elven city at such a young age. 

 

Your application was good but not good enough to be truly perfect. Though fret not as you have 24 hours to make the changes.

I recommend that you check out the "New Player Discord" and wiki when times allow it!

Feel free to contact me on the forums, in game (/m MadYeAd) or over at discord with a simple tag - MadYeAd#6091.

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Well done applicant! I've had an absolutely amazing time reading your application and only few application manage to catch my interest by so much.

I can only hope that you're able to have an amazing time on LoTC, being able to fully develop your own character with other people as time goes on.

The being said...

 

On the behalf of the Application team, I warmly welcome you to the Lord of The Craft community. I hope you the best of luck as you explore and roleplay on Atlas!

 

You’ll be whitelisted and implemented very shortly, you may also want to check out “ The New Player Discord ” for questions or dwell deeper into the wiki if times allow it.

While in game you can also use /atreq [message] for any assistance you might need from an Application Member or directly message me in game - /msg MadYeAd. Not to mention that /help is a very helpful command that should be utilized.

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