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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Reddit
    Discord: SmoothCriminal#1327
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: If the person who made this review, refers to me not to "powergame"(?), I would just remind myself that everyone likes to have fun. I never really liked overpowered characters in stories so I won't make myself op as well
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: That is a hard question. Though, it is unfair doing that. For example: if 2 kingdoms are close to a war and a a spy is infultrating one. Now this guy kills someone from the enemy kingdom. If the guy that was killed just told the leader who the spy is over discord it would be very unfair.
    Status: Accepted

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))

 

*Huh, how does she know my name. I guess I'll just tell her.* "Well,"  I sit down "I grew up in a small village. So small that most people didn't knew it existed. My father was a Hunter and I was always going to become his successor. But, one day when he went out," There is a tear in my eye "He never came back. The next day, he hadn't returned either, so I rushed into the forest to search for him. I searched for him, for the whole day, and I decided to return home. It had started to rain and I had a strange uncomfortable feeling. It started to storm. I ran. But then, I tripped. In that moment, time moved slower to me. I thought that I was only getting some scratches from this fall. But I was so wrong. When I opened my eyes I saw that I was falling down a hill. My last thought was that I would surely die. I closed my eyes, and than, I hit the ground.

 

I woke up. The first thing that came to my mind was that this is the afterlife. I looked around the place, it was a small cave with a good view out of the forest. I was lying in a bad made of straw and a bit of leather. Right next to me there was sitting someone. "So you're finally awake." It was a human . "have some soup" I sat up and drank it. It was delicious. "You are lucky I found you, you have some serious injuries. If I hadn't found you, you'd be dead" Just now I felt my broken leg and arms. "Now, I suppose you need to head home. I mean, you were sleeping here for three days" "What, really?" "Yes. Let's just get you home. Can you walk?" "I'll try" And after a few hours we found my home village. 

 

It was completely destroyed. I quickly ran into the village ,even though I still had a broken leg, to search my parents. And when I went into the left remains of my house I saw my mother. The corpse of my mother. Right next to her there was my father. He was dying right now, He lost his left arm and he is losing blood every second. Then, he spoke his final words :"Son, you are here."  I was completely paralyzed "I am dying right now, There are just some things you need to accept." Who... who did this t.. to you?" "It was a human." Then I realized it, the guy who saved me was then one who killed my parents, no, the entire village. "Take this" And his final act was to give me his bow "Remember, no matter what you do, I will always be proud of you." He died. I broke down in tears.

 

From that moment I knew that I had to avenge my parents, no my village. I got stronger over the years and I keep on searching him to this day. This is my story


Character Name: Sylfuro
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: grey skirt, belt, black & blue long hair ,leftt arm: cyan-blue tunic, 6ft8, red eyes, avarage weight ,grey skin,skinny & muscular,right arm: bandages
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

-Please read a little bit of our Wiki to get more of a feel fore our lore, so that you may properly implement that into your application. You don't have to be 100% true to our lore, but your character may not be overpowered or have strong relics, as we would like to know what your character is going to be like before their journey begins, not once it has already happened.

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting them, please contact me!

My discord is Chorale_#4767! If you don’t have Discord, please message me on the forums!

If you need to contact me or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here: Discord

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To get started, I suggest going to tutorial island or do; /creq Can a Wilven come assist me?

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