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Vengefulthinking
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Using information that your character does not know, basically using external factors to affect the game
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: essentially a player doing stuff in the game that their character couldnt do
    Status: Accepted

Much is unknown of Valkar Stone. He lived in the wilderness for most of his adult life, and only emerged at the conclusion of the war between Renatus-Marna and Norland. After hearing the tales of war heroes, Valkar wanted to carve his name into the stones of time. When he departed the forest he came to find himself on the outskirts of Kastrovy that bordered Senntisten. He was met by 5 men from the county. Still bearing his reclusive and hostile tendencies from years alone in the wild, Valkar attacked the men. He held his own but was overcome by the bulk of them. As Alfrik Kastrovat was about to heave the execution ax through Valkar's neck, Ser Marek Kastrovat raised his hand to signal a halt of the execution. Impressed with the raw aggression and power of Valkar, he invited him to dine with him that evening. Slowly but surely after every mug of mead Valkar began to open up, telling stories of his gruesome childhood, and brutal years surviving the elements. While only a short time had pass Ser Marek developed a deep respect for Valkar and Valkar in turn began to trust the Count. 


Character Name: Valkar Stone
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 27
Physical Description: 6'2 235lbs muscular build. Messy short hair and rugged beard. Brown hair, blue eyes, and a voice like gravel.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Changed Status to Under Review

 

Your application has been placed on…

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Your bio seems to make him a 'main character' type character, but the fact is that nobody on the server has heard of him before. I strongly suggest a more modest approach to things, plus he can not start out as an important political person or have any magics at all.

You do not reference our lore at all in the bio, this is a requirement, you can read up on lore on the wiki.

He is not praised as a god by anyone, please remove all references to this.

Your powergaming definition isn't quite right, I suggest taking a peek at our wiki for reference.

 

 

If any of the reasons I stated involve the wiki, this link will take you right to the home page, where you can find quick links to the metagaming and power emoting definitions, as well as look around to browse our server lore! WIKI

 

Being placed on Pending means that your application was solid, though there are still some issues present that need a bit of tweaking. You’ve got 24 hours to make them using the [Edit] feature of the forum. Whenever you make any changes, contact me and I will review the application once more. After 24 hours your app will either be Accepted or Denied.

This discord link:https://discord.gg/eySYjqw is the link to our New Player Discord, feel free to join and ask any questions you’d like, as well use it as a tool once you are accepted!

 

If you’ve got any questions at all, feel free to message me on the forums, at my Discord, MickMeist#0001, or on the server with the /msg MickMeist command, or the /atreq command will allow you to place a ticket for assistance with myself of one of my colleagues!


 

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Your application has been:

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On behalf of the Application Team, and LoTC as a whole, I’d like to welcome you to our community!

You will be implemented shortly, during this brief wait I implore you to visit our WIKI and continue reading up on server lore.

 

This discord link:https://discord.gg/eySYjqw is the link to our New Player Discord, feel free to join and ask any questions you’d like, as well use it as a tool once you are accepted!

 

If you’ve got any questions at all, feel free to message me on the forums, at my Discord, MickMeist#0001, or on the server with the /msg MickMeist command, or the /atreq command will allow you to place a ticket for assistance with myself of one of my colleagues!

 

Can’t wait to see you roleplaying!

 

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