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VickyGotSkills
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: When someone uses out of game info to use in the game for advantages
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: When someone is roleplaying and they kill someone. For example, they may say "Mark kills Drew", cutting off the roleplay.
    Status: Accepted

Elaine is part Wood Elf and part Human, which is why she is pale. Her dad is a Full Wood Elf, but her mom is a Highlander. Elaine can be timid around new creatures (other elves, dwarves, orcs, ect.). However, her personality can changed to energetic when around old friends. She uses her hood to hide her Elf ears since she has had some bad run ins with racist Orcs. Since she is part Wood Elf, her dad taught her a lot about the forest, like how to tell which trees apart, how to hunt well, and how to hide in plain sight. Something that she learned from her mom is her harp playing. In Highlandic cultures, most songs were about war and fire, but Elaine’s mom played songs like no other. They would make someone feel loved and happy. She taught Elaine many songs and she would play them if she ever felt like crying. They would cheer her right up. Elaine may be small, being around 5’4 in height, but what some goblins and dwarves don’t know is that she can stand her ground and has even defeated some large Forest dwarves. There is a secret that she had never told anyone: she killed her younger sister, Adalaine, who went “missing” about 4 years ago. It was an accident, but it changed how Elaine saw Life and Death forever... Elaine never forgave herself and can’t bring herself to tell her parents, who are still searching for any chance she may be alive.


Character Name: Elaine
Character Race: Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 19
Physical Description: Long, brownish hair, with a hood covering most of it. Elaine is part Wood Elf and part Human, which is why she is pale. Her eyes are a fierce blue.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Hello! Thank you for submitting an application, you’re almost done but there’s just a few changes you need to make, make these changes within 24 hours.

  • Your definition of powergaming isn’t quite correct, you can look at this link for assistance.
  • Your biography must include at least two pieces of lore, you can take a peak at the server’s wiki to look at all the wonderful lore our server has to offer.
  • Your interesting facts are good but you need at least one flaw out of the three facts given.
  • Your skin does not quite fit the look of wood elf, it would need to be a bit more tan. However, if you cannot find a replacement skin, a mixed-elf would do just fine.

If you need further help, you can feel free to message me on the forums, on Discord (Talavok#3594) or you can visit the New Player Discord.  I hope to hear back from you soon!

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Thank you looking at my application! Also, I took what you said and changed a lot so there is lore and correct race :)

Do I notify you when I have finished my changes, or do I wait? Sorry for bothering you ?

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Your application looks much better, but you still need to correct one more thing within 24 hours:

  • Your biography must include at least two pieces of lore, you can take a peak at the server’s wiki to look at all the wonderful lore our server has to offer. For clarification, naming races does not count towards the two minimum, isle and city names are good examples as well as certain events.  

If you need further help, you can feel free to message me on the forums, on Discord (Talavok#3594) or you can visit the New Player Discord. I hope to hear back from you soon!

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I think I corrected everything! Thank you for helping me make a better backstory!

 

21 minutes ago, Bluee said:

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Your application looks much better, but you still need to correct one more thing within 24 hours:

  • Your biography must include at least two pieces of lore, you can take a peak at the server’s wiki to look at all the wonderful lore our server has to offer. For clarification, naming races does not count towards the two minimum, isle and city names are good examples as well as certain events.  

If you need further help, you can feel free to message me on the forums, on Discord (Talavok#3594) or you can visit the New Player Discord. I hope to hear back from you soon!

I think I corrected everything! Thank you for helping me make a better backstory!

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Congratulations on being accepted, your application was superb! This is just the first step to having a fantastic and magical roleplay experience.


If you need any further assistance, please - do not hesitate to contact me in-game (Bluee) on Discord (Talavok#3594) or via the forums. You can also join the New Player Discord for extra help if you so desire it.

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